hey y'all i wanna see ur mediator stories. i finished the last book *tear tear* it was REALLY good! so im gonna check those out. luvvya lots,
Missy!

heya girls!
sorry I havent gotten to read but things have been major crazy lately!
I loved this chapter though! I loved all the detail, especially at the begining! That was a really amazing start to the chapter!
and I'm glad that Spot got away!!
Loved this chapter I promise that I will read/review asap! and it will be longer than this! cant wait for more! (im just in a bad mood, the kid i like a lot has a gf!)

This is a great story! It has a lot of action which is good...and how you've incorporated real facts. I like how Maddie is becoming a lot less shy, with her sticking up for Star and to her dad. I can't wait to see what happens!

cool story
are you going write more hope u do

becki

wow I am so sorry that it has taken me this long to read and review this!! I have been so busy and then was on vacation for the last week!! I really am sorry!
"“So this is about your reputation. Is life just an act for you? Are you just an act?” Star shouted. She half-heartedly felt awful for what she had asked, but she was far too angry to negotiate." wow That was such a great line! I never really thought about it b4 but I guess it really does seem like he is just an act! I thought that was really good!
and then I loved when Spot came back and kissed her and said it wasn't an act! That was sweet! I'm glad that the two of them are alright!
Poor poor Spot being taken away!! I hope nothing bad is gonna happen to him!! I am kinda confused about whats going on with Queens, but Im sure that I will be filled in in the later chapters!
And I loved how Spot and Jack screamed on the ride! haha lmao!
Anyway great chapter!! Can't wait for more, and see if Spot is okay!! :)

gasp...oh no poor spot! this chapter was wonderful as always, nice and long and engrossing! many thanks to your writing skills and story which brightened up an otherwise boring day of classes and work!!

i never was a big fan of spot stories before but thanx to you I adore spot stories. I love the passionate way that you write this story. Awesome work and keep it up!

alright goys sorry it took me so long to get here and review but wasnt getting my mail and then been busy...yes i am making excuses for myself...I should stop that! lol But really I am very sorry! But Im here I read it and now once i am donw with my ramblings i will review. Is it just me or do you noctice that in like ll my reviews I ramble...or maybe not in your reviews...except for now! lol But im done...on to the review! (which is what u really care about!)
Great chapter!
I liked the part with Star and Spot I thought they where really sweet together, and I thought they way ti was written was really great!!
And Striker...hm...I really wanna know whats gonna happen with him!! And at the fair that they are going to go to tonight!! That should be very interesting!!
I Just hope that nothing too bad will happen, and I hope that no onw will get hurt! That would be horrible!! liek really really horrible!
I love Spot! lol He is so adrobale and so like tough and everything! lol I love how he was joking around wiht mouth and everything! lol (wow that is the first time ever i have ever called/writen him mouth instead of Davey!! We get to share this first together! lol Yeah sorry rambling I know!!)
“What’s stoppin ya?” Spot asked gently fidgeted with her hair.

“Time.” Star answered bluntly. After that being said she finally stood up and stretched her cramped muscles.

hahah so true! time...stops everyone from doing everything they ever wanted! I really liked that! I don't know why but it was really good!! Great line!!
But anyway great chapter!! I'm very glad that you two updated again and I can't wait for the next chapter! Which I will try to get to sooner!
And sorry about all mr rambling in this review! lol You two are probably like "is she out of her mind?!" lol But I tend to ramble.
And actually I was wondering if you guys had anytime and If you could read my story that I put up and maybe drop me a review and tell me what you think?!?!? Well if you want to it's called Falling up. So if you want to I would appraciate that! But if not dont worry!!
Update soon though!

Hey, yeah sorry bout that I don't know if I have you story on elert or I just wasn't paying attenttion to my emails but thanks for telling me you had updated!
I like that you made Sugar come back! I mean she still needs to be in the story so it was good that you didn't have her leave! And I'm excited to see what she is going to do! lol
I love how you have Maddie, Star, and Cassie all win the bet and have them making fun of the boys! lol That was a cute part! I mean everyone seems to get along! lol And when Cassie threw the coin I love how you said Spot had too much pride to go for it, but Jack and Race did! lol I was cracking up! lol I could actually see Spot sitting there! lol And the Jack acting like nothing happened! lol Very funny! But I like how you wrote everones relationship they all seem like such a good friends! :)
And Spot nd Star are so cute! lol I really love what you wrote bout them swimming! lol And you can so tell that Star is so in loove with Spot! lol How she laughs all the time, and just by hwo she acts around him! And of course you can tell that Spot oes her too because of the way he acts around her! They are adorable! lol
And I love the words you give Spot1 He makes me laugh, he's all sly and witty and cocky but yet he is just so in love and so adorable! lool Great job with his character! :)
I think Maddie and Takoda are cute together too! But they have more of a simple relationship! I mean we still know they love each other and everything so it's still cute! And simple is good too! I like the way you write them together, very cute! :)
Can't wait to read more, and see whats going to happen! :)
(I'll be away till like friday afternoon so If you update before then I'll review when I get back!!)

This is SO good! PLEASE update soon! And have some Cassie/Jack romance now, please?? They're uberly cute as well.

Wow, you're a GREAT writer. You have VERY good descriptiveness ((Which I love.)) and you know how to make a story fast-paced to where it's fast enough to keep the readers wanting more, but not too fast to where we have NO clue what's going on or too slow in knowing WAY too much and just wanting some more action. Hehe!

YAY, Sugar's gone. I didn't like her that much, but I still hope she finds someone one day, haha!

Well, I'll be waiting for more! T to the oodles! *deuces*

*Bee Emm Vee*

that was a cute chapter! lol
I really think that tokoda and notebook are so cute! and they way they where chassing eachother down the street! that was really sweet!
I really hope that star and notebook don't have to leave to go back home!! That would be horrible not just for them but for spot, tokoda, and all the newsies! I mean they have all become so close and for them to leave would be like everyone else losing a part of themselves! I really want them to stay!
" ‘The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return.’" lol i love that quote! lol and moulin rouge! thats such a great movie...funny i was actually just upstairs listening to the soundtrack!! lol
The only thing i don't get is why sugar left. I mean she was really ** last chapter and said she was going to do something else but then she decided to let them be. i just thought that seemed a bit weird.
But other then that i thought it was a really sweet chapter! :)

Allie

Hmm I'm not quite sure how I feel about it. The whole thing with Sugar just seems so abrupt and really no motivation because she was stomping angry mad last chapter. So it's just weird that she would do that with and give up because it doesn't seem like her. I'm also not really sure about the whole thoughts that's going through Maddie's head. Why would she be leaving? Because if that was the case it should have been in there somewhere of why she would. And her thoughts just seem so repetative. But I waiting to see what happens next including tiger proposing maybe.

aww that was a cute chapter...well the whol part of spot saving star! lol
I really like spot and star! they are so cute and they seem to really love each other! I really wish that sugar would take that crips advice and just leave them alone!
I really don't like sugar! she needs to get over thr fact that spot doesn't like her anymore and never will like her! lol she is just a **! lol
But spot came and saved star! that was so cute...and she was so happy to see him! they are really very cute together...i think that thye belong together and really need each other! lol thay are really perfect for each other!
I wounder what sugar is going to do next! Should be very interesting!
Great chapter...i cant wait to read more! :)

Allie

P.S. sorry this isn't very long but im in a rush...trying to pack and then gotta leave!

aw that was a very cute chapter!
I think spot is so sweet! and you can really tell that he loves her from everythinbg that he does for her! Its sos weet...i like to think of him having that sweet side! im glad that you two decided to show it! And im glad that he finally found someone and isnt running around with other girls and he can settle down! thats very sweet! Its a change from all the other stories where he likes someone but still messes with other girls! I really like that about ur story!
The detail is very good too! I really enjoy reading it! Its so fun and very interesting!
I think spot and star are so cute together! I love how they wont let anything come between them! Thats so sweet...they are really in love! I really enjoy reading them together! You can never tell what is going to happen next! Thats the best part! like when he took her to the theater! lol that was so sweet! And how he spilled out his heart to her! Very sweet...i really enjjoyed that!
Ah and sugar! wow she needs to get over her self! lol spot doesnt want her! wonder whats she is gonna do!?!?!? should be very interesting! Im excited to read it! :) and i cant wait untill stars big night! im sure that will be great as well!
Great chapter again! Cant wait to read more!! :)

Allie

Hmm do you mean a tiered skirt or a layered skirt because I spent an hour trying to look in the all the fashion websites if they had a layered skirt then but all I could come up with is a tiered skirt. Well I wish you guys would update more often, i have completely forgotten this story. I can't wait to see what happens next though.