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jheria s. Maelwys
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
ah...
very good. It manages to be spacewithintimes, that is, not specifically within a movie, a book, a timebetween movies or books or imagination or anything, just is and I like that. Also the original spelling of the girl's name although I prefer Kathryn, the most beautiful... I'm babbling now, as Marie says at sixty miles per hour... I'll shut up and you don't have a headache.
-the-coconut-bubble-
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
I am so, so glad I found this story. It's exactly how a Jason and Marie fic should be. With the infinitely hot Matt Damon starring in my mind's eye of course. Well done, well done indeed.
Tigeress-10
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Not fluffy, but not hideously depressing either--you managed to write about things that are, in a word, sad, yet still portray it all wonderfully.
The last line is gorgeous as well. And the small touches like the notebook and her journal, the cookies--they all add to it.
MKofGod
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
Wow! Great story! Well done with all the descriptions and characterization. Well done!
moveitgirl21
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
I love this story in my opinion, there aren't enough Jason/Marie fics. I really never like the whole Jason/Nicky pairing in the movies anyway.
Jowen
2007-09-06 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this fic! It is so well written and simply beautiful. I wish there was more. I also wish Marie didn’t die or at least that they didn’t kill her off so quickly. Sadly, the writers were on crack.
Almyra
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Just really lovely. You captured Marie's voice perfectly - I could hear her speaking and see her and Jason clearly. Well done. *adds to favs*
Lucifer's Garden
2007-06-16 . chapter 1
Very good. Surprisingly good. You have real talent!
Rachael
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
I really loved this, I hate how tortured Jason is, but obviously I love it at the same time, don't we all. Really great insight to their relationship, sorta how I imagined it would be.
Rach
seren23
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
I just found your story and am just amazed at how perfectly you got the two of them. I always loved Marie and this is just lovely. Thank you for writing this!
thisisironic
2006-08-09 . chapter 1
This is a beautifully written fic. I got to the end and thought, "More! I want more!"

I love the way you crafted these two in this piece and how they had these small, sweet moments between them yet you kept in the danger of Bourne and his past.

Again, this was absolutely beautiful.
lana
2006-06-28 . chapter 1
i know this was posted forever ago...but i just wanted to say that i loved it. ur writing is beautiful. simple and real. thank u very much.
Aimee5
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful. You had me right from the very beginning; I had to read it all in one go and as fast as I could, but at the same time as slow as I could so as to make it last. You have both Jason and Marie perfectly, and I love all the small touches such as the cookies and the bracelet, and her having left it in the mini. I'm still upset that they abandoned Marie so early on in the series, and I'm glad people are still writing about this wonderful relationship.
lady-of-imagination
2006-04-07 . chapter 1
i liked your story. it was a sweet extra scene between the two.
Zteif
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
oh... you've got them both down so perfect!! i love this story, it's going down in my heart as a favorite. great job!
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