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Sdarian
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
I'm sure that Washington students comment confused the hell out of everyone who never read that. I'm wondering if you know somewhere I could get a copy of it. I had thought I had it stored somewhere on my computer, but after looking for it once reminded of it, I couldn't find it.

Also, this story is off to a good start. I'm a little tired of how often you've been repeating some things (ex. girl and panda), since it isn't really funny and is just annoying to read the same thing 6 times in a row.
TravelerOfNemesis
2008-10-09 . chapter 3
If you're going to insist on accuracy of terms, Nerima isn't a district either. Nerima is a WARD of Tokyo, which contains the fictional district of Furinkan. In fact, "city" would be a more accurate term for Nerima than "district", since the various Wards of Tokyo are run like separate cities.

P.S. Very bad. Very funny. I like it.
Mizu
2008-01-08 . chapter 12
:Let us go then, you and I when the evening is spread out against the sky like a patient etherized upon a table Let us go through certain half-deserted streets the muttering retreats of restless nights in one night cheap hotels...:
-The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Eliot - one of my favorite poems...and one I've memorized (yes, I am crazy).

I am enjoying this fic lots and lots! Keep up the good work!

-Mizu
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2007-06-03 . chapter 15
Question. Ranma's Sailor Uranus and Ukyou is Neptune, correct?

However it seems as though Ukyou is the "Dominant partner" Which is actually Uranus role instead of Neptune.

Ukyou's also taller then Ranma-Chan, while Neptune is shorter then Uranus, at least in cannon.

So am I simply incorrect in assuming Ukyou is the "dominant partner" or something else?

Please explain.
Steel Phoenix
2007-04-23 . chapter 15
HOLY... (BLEEP)ING BLEEP!

The sheer amount of awesomeness that is contained within this tale is beyond measure!

the only thing I can see that needs improvement is the "last updated" bit...

More? Please?
Sdarian
2007-04-03 . chapter 8
Pretty funny. I'm pretty sure though, that Toltiir is an Elder God and has powers and abilities similar in scope and power to Kami-sama, and is therefore not subserviant to him. And Cthulhu is an Elder Thing or an Outer God or something, and from what I know of them, the Outer Gods at least are beyond the scope of Kami-sama's powers and he would likely get eaten by them. Not to say that you don't get to change stuff like that in fics, but I generally find that it makes the story better when you leace constant things like that alone. The best story that I have come across that has delt with Eldar Things and such has been 'Sic Semper Morituri', which is one of my favorite stories.
AshK
2006-12-26 . chapter 15
Excellent update! I like it!

Sincerely,
AshK
Innortal
2006-12-25 . chapter 15
Hope it fixes the curse as well. Wonder what Lilith will due about Ayanami.
Alex Ultra
2006-12-22 . chapter 14
WAH! I want more! MORE PLEASE!

(Starts humming 'Time-Warp, Time-Warp, Time-Warp!' over and over with no sense as to the source of this term, but with great enjoyment at the mindless entertainment that repeating two one-syllable words conveys.)

"Okay, I don't know who put me in here, but I want out right now!" Yup, that makes about as much sense as expected, ne? All normal in the life of Ranma Saotome. ^_^;

YAY! I LIKE THIS STORY! :D

Alex Ultra: Time-Warp Time-Warp Time-Warp Time-Warp Time-Warp
LATER
Anonymous
2006-12-16 . chapter 5
I'm sorry but...I don't understand anything about your story. It's too...confusing.Oh well. Please update and God bless!
Howard Russell
2006-12-16 . chapter 14
Time meant nothing, never would again
Let's do the Time Warp again!
Let's do the Time Warp again!

Loads of fun!

The most impressive thing is that it's still cohesive. With all the crossovers you're doing, I expected it to explode long before now.

When the brainwashed Endymion arc gets resolved, that's going to be fun. That is, if Akane keeps her newfound appreciation for the fairer sex. If so, the Akane/Ukyo rivaly will be back on, but this time with Ukyo having the advantage. Could be quite interesting.

On the other hand, as the reincarnated Endymion, she's destined to end up with Usagi, whoever she turns out to be. Maybe you turned her on to lesbianism for that plot-point.

Still, the rivalry could be fun to play out for a while.
Howard Russell
2006-12-15 . chapter 12
The poem you misquoted is "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by T.S. Eliot

Let us go then, you and I,
When the evening is spread out against the sky
Like a patient etherized upon a table;
--T.S. Eliot

Administering ether to a patient makes so much more sense than to a corpse.
Materia-Blade
2006-12-11 . chapter 14
Lillith Slash Adam interaction: ... crepy...

Timewarp pun?: Very Funny. Like TBS.
AshK
2006-12-10 . chapter 14
About time for an update! It's been too long! Anyway great work! I like it!

Sincerely,
AshK
Trahloc
2006-08-16 . chapter 13
Good stuff, finnally caught up to where you left off. I hope you dont keep Ranma's curse permenant, that always sucks. Be cool if he stayed 'cursed' but gained his mothers ability to shape shift ... so he basically becomes 'cured' ... but still gets turned into Ranma-chan if he's splashed when in Ranma-kun mode... Well thanks for the story, I like your little tangents, make the story more fun :)
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