You. Are. So. Weird.

YOU ROCK!

I think i get it. Well thank you for killing the evil that no one would kill before.(she sux yay!) anyways. The showers are proubably some mind control thing and the whole place is proubably run by dark matter/ Zero2

OMG! You killed Hilary! You Bas- wait, nevermind. Ha, I'm so not funny.

MOst of the humor here is hit-or-miss, but I say it hits for me 60%ish..

So.. keep writing.

Adults are that way.. *snicker*. How did waddle dee drink... or pee... Funny man... woman... whatever.

whe! i can tell incredable stupidity will ensue. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (gets slapped in the face by kirby but keeps laghing) HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (kirby sucks up jiggly puff and uses double slap.) uh... Sorry great stroy.

nother good chapter. I'm still trying to understand how you came to the conclusion that the characters are ten. if you ask me it's more fun not to pin an age on them although i guesse 10 is ok for a height to age guesse. good story.

Nice story so far but how do kirby and waddle dee talk? kirby can't talk and waddle dee doesn't have a mouth. Lol. Uh good so far.

I thought I reviewed ch. 5... The very thought of a drunk Adeleine is making me grin like a fool. _ Isn't there a RBA (Root Beeraholics Anonymous) or something there? Poor Waddle Dee needs help with his addiction. *drinks 25th can of cherry Pepsi* What? Don't look at me like that! It's NOT an addiction! I can stop anytime!

LOL this is one of the funniest things I've ever read. It's just so hilarious. Update soon. Please?

I loved the so-called sado-masochism part! I can actually see Ribbon making Dedede slap himself! XD This is making me laugh so hard! Great job!

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*laughs for an extended period of time*

XD

That's the funniest Kirby fanfic I've read in a while. Great job.

Meh, this chapter was a little good with everyone ganging up on Waddle Dee and the whole tether thing, but Chapter 3 to me is still better than this.

Still a good story, though.

Edlader Kikur, if you love Ado so much I wouldn't suggest reading chapter 17 (I think) of the "Dreamland Story" by GameTrekker. It has some REAL Ado bashing in there (why am I telling you this?)! Wonderful story, please update soon.

This is pretty funny! I'm a rabid Adeleine fan and was a little sad at the Ado-bashing (I like to call her Ado), but it's better than a story without her completely! I especially loved how they exploited her to get money. Adeleine's frequent spazzes is REALLY in character! XD

Wow. An update just for me? I'm honored. I updated kind of a while ago. Took you a while to either write this or read your reviews. But thanks and hope you update again soon.