Reviews for Redemption and Its Discontents

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Fledgling 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseHeartwrenching. A very twisted take on what it means to feel pity, but one that works, because it's Sesshoumaru, though I don't know if such a subtle theme of revenge would have succeeded in another writer's hands. This is a haunting piece that I can feel I will come back to, because it's so rich in the parts that you've left unsaid. Much love!
jasmine lotus 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseWhat a wonderfully subtle revenge!! The sheer irony of it just kills me.Thumbs up!
J Luc Pitard 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abuseBrutal and believable. The manga took that choice out of Sessh's hands, but your story stands as a 'what if' very nicely. I like Kohaku's revenge.
Moonglow gal 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseTell me, do you write original stuff? I don't think I read any mention of it, but, honestly, you write like the authors we read in English class. And I actually like it. How much thought must you put into these? My head hurts just thinking about it...
shadow-inu14 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abusewow way deep.
Lili 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis a very a-typical, yet beautiful and strong tale. I am getting to like Sesshomaru's character more and more, for its complexity makes him the most interesting character...he is the less human, the more "demon" like one, almost divine and his change in attitude as soon as he starts using Tensaiga is often misunderstood...he's not enjoying it and he's being indebted with a new burden he cannot deal with...so the fact that this fiction deals with this is very pleasant. It helps that it also happens to be so well written! Keep on writing!
Steven P. P 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abuseA very well written and moving story. I must admit that I did not finish reading the Tales From the House of the Moon, because I felt you overdid the drama a bit, but in this one-shot it fits well. It is interesting that Sesshomaru is angsting over something which only seems to be terrible from his point of view alone. If you think about it, hundreds of people get killed by "swords" each day. If the ones saved by Tenseiga were not meant to live, these people were not meant to die. One sword which gives life instead of taking it for a change does not really make a difference.
senbo-sama 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseSimply moving. With no sad stories, only the basic facts we know from the series, you have created one of the most inspirational stories I have ever read. Maybe it's not a good message, but it fits Sesshomaru so well. Your talent in writing is incredible, simply incredible, moving, genius.
alterfano 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseWonderful.
ManonLeChat 2006-03-10 ch 1,	abuseHow many writers of fanfiction, when faced with a challenge like "revenge" would come up with an idea as subtle and slicing as this? So well conceived and executed. To echo another reviewer, I would kill for a tenth of your talent and intutition for language!
crazydaisy101 2006-01-24 ch 1,	abuseGasp! That was so beautiful. I mean really really beautiful. Just when I think your writing can't get any better, it does. Keep up the good work. You are brilliant. I bow before your incredible genius. bows
BN 2006-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseFucking Beautiful. Pardon the profanity.
Gina 2006-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI can't exactly describe what I felt through this reading... but I felt every word. This is a great piece of work. Another one heh. Strong and catching. You're literally incredible.
Suisyo 2006-01-09 ch 1,	abuseAmazing...and quite moving. So much truth in it as well.
Puppet-Cat 2006-01-07 ch 1,	abuseYou now I love you? tus historias me dejan volada por horas lo malo es que estoy trabajando y no atiendo a nadie lol menos mal que es solo un trabajo de verano asi que no importa a quien ignore. Kohaku es uno de mis favoritos me recuerda un poco a Shinji Ikari de evangelion por lo atormentado los dos son niños muy delicados emocionalmente ya me estoy llendo en la volada de nuevo y mi jefe me esta mirando extraño ,mejor me voy :P actualiza pronto los cuentos de la casa de la luna soy una adicta.

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