O_O . . . You break me . . .

I lost faith in fanfictions long ago but I think that I have regained it ^_^

I really like this oneshot, it was deep and moving. Even though Kohaku saw Sesshoumaru's good deed as hell on earth, others saw it as a blessing. Sesshoumaru is unable to escape his fate. The more people he helps the more he is driven to do so, despite the fact that he wishes to feel the exact opposite. And the more people he helps the more people seem to ask him for help. His pity leads to a total lack of mercy displayed by the people whom seek him for assistance; when it comes to them begging him for help. Again great Oneshot!

Simply beautiful.

Heartwrenching. A very twisted take on what it means to feel pity, but one that works, because it's Sesshoumaru, though I don't know if such a subtle theme of revenge would have succeeded in another writer's hands. This is a haunting piece that I can feel I will come back to, because it's so rich in the parts that you've left unsaid.

Much love!

What a wonderfully subtle revenge!! The sheer irony of it just kills me.Thumbs up!

Brutal and believable. The manga took that choice out of Sessh's hands, but your story stands as a 'what if' very nicely. I like Kohaku's revenge.

Tell me, do you write original stuff? I don't think I read any mention of it, but, honestly, you write like the authors we read in English class. And I actually like it. How much thought must you put into these? My head hurts just thinking about it...

wow way deep.

This a very a-typical, yet beautiful and strong tale. I am getting to like Sesshomaru's character more and more, for its complexity makes him the most interesting character...he is the less human, the more "demon" like one, almost divine and his change in attitude as soon as he starts using Tensaiga is often misunderstood...he's not enjoying it and he's being indebted with a new burden he cannot deal with...so the fact that this fiction deals with this is very pleasant. It helps that it also happens to be so well written! Keep on writing!

A very well written and moving story. I must admit that I did not finish reading the Tales From the House of the Moon, because I felt you overdid the drama a bit, but in this one-shot it fits well.
It is interesting that Sesshomaru is angsting over something which only seems to be terrible from his point of view alone. If you think about it, hundreds of people get killed by "swords" each day. If the ones saved by Tenseiga were not meant to live, these people were not meant to die. One sword which gives life instead of taking it for a change does not really make a difference.

Simply moving. With no sad stories, only the basic facts we know from the series, you have created one of the most inspirational stories I have ever read. Maybe it's not a good message, but it fits Sesshomaru so well. Your talent in writing is incredible, simply incredible, moving, genius.

Wonderful.

How many writers of fanfiction, when faced with a challenge like "revenge" would come up with an idea as subtle and slicing as this? So well conceived and executed. To echo another reviewer, I would kill for a tenth of your talent and intutition for language!

Gasp! That was so beautiful. I mean really really beautiful. Just when I think your writing can't get any better, it does. Keep up the good work. You are brilliant.

I bow before your incredible genius.

*bows*