i really love the song, but the story didn't really go with it. i still liked the story though. i liked how you portrayed the characters' emotions. you are really good at that. oh, and one random thing: in canada (that's where i live), we call "beanies" toques...it's a french thing.
i'll be reading more of your stories. you are quite talented.

Oh Lonnie-kins, I never did review this.

As always another brilliant work of genius lit. I love this, just like the first time I read it and neglected to review. The Miroku/Koharu scene was mwuah! bravisimo! and the final little Miroku thought sequence, inspired!

teh heart always
Kelly

^_^ Pretty pretty, Lonnie-chan. Better than I remember it when I first read it, to be honest. The 2nd to last scene between Miroku and Koharu is just... perfection. La.

XD And "No More Sex."

Yeah, right. ^_^;

I like it i cant wait for your next chappie ;)

FireHanyouDog

aww.. that's so sad..

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