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| Lord Of The Marsh 2008-02-05 ch 4,  | abuseThe story is intriguing so far, but do you mean it to be a movie fic? If not, the dwarf should not be named Ginarrbrik. How about Tomfar, so the story can fit in with NarniaMUCK? Or perhaps a name of your own invention if you don't want it to. If it IS a movie fic, then it should be spelled Grrnabrik. That's all. Keep writing. |
| Well-wisher 2006-07-21 ch 13, | abuseCan you please write an epilouge? Maybe a clear 'happily-ever-after' where Yigil meets the four monarchs in shame perhaps, maybe still wanting to die, being forgiven, but not forgiving himself, meets Ed, aand figures things out, and blah de blah de blah. Goes on...you'll know what to do. |
| Mousewolf 2006-05-28 ch 13, | abusePoor puppy. *pats him* You'll heal. Everything heals, with time. |
| jasonc65 2006-05-27 ch 13, | abuseSo you surprised us one last time. "People killed my sister..." And was that a reference to Jadis' sister? Poor Darcie. Well, at least he has a new name. I hope there's a sequel. |
| jasonc65 2006-05-27 ch 12, | abuseThat was so sad. The Fauns are still prejudiced. They seem to have learned nothing. "But it was only a last attempt of the Witch..." There seemed to be several ways to interpret that. Anyway, it was an interesting story. I hope you were not quite done yet. |
| viennacantabile 2006-05-21 ch 11, | abusereview number thirty! :D eek, is it done? if it's not, please update! :D |
| jasonc65 2006-03-18 ch 11, | abusePoor nameless one, struggling to forgive himself. I wonder what he'll think of Tumnus, since Fauns used to hunt Talking Wolves. |
| Mousewolf 2006-03-14 ch 11, | abusewoah. Great story. Incredible, even. |
| A Amelia Black 2006-03-13 ch 11, | abusethat's so amazing, loved it! :D You're the one who inspired me in the first place for my wolf Ivaylo...and I have to say, Ivaylo has quickly become everyone's favourite character! Go figure :D We love our wolves and you write them so perfectly Great job! Cheers Amelia |
| The Phantom of Avenue B 2006-03-05 ch 6, | abuseYour writing is so dramatic and detailed. Good job! Keep it up! |
| jasonc65 2006-02-28 ch 10, | abuseSo Maugrim betrayed Fenris? Interesting. |
| Mousewolf 2006-02-28 ch 10, | abuseAww! Big kitty-cat helping puppy, right? |
| viennacantabile 2006-02-27 ch 10, | abuseyay! i like that he's redeemed. :D |
| A Amelia Black 2006-02-27 ch 10, | abusethat was cool how you did the whole "i am stone" part, as he slowly lost himself. Very interesting and yay! for being brought back (grins) I gotta love him heh...I wonder if he's Ivaylo from my fic.. j/k lol. can't wait to see where you go from here Cheers Amelia |
| Mousewolf 2006-02-27 ch 9, | abuseOh! Poor fenris. Are you gonna write more? Is he gonna fight with aslan when the time comes? |