wonderful

I love this fic, I really hope you are able to update soon. LOL!

Yay! It is great to see another chapter for this, CJay. Your stories are just a pleasure to read, keep up the work- I'll be waiting whenever you have the next part ready.

~Nzie

Cjay,

I'm so glad to see that your still writing this story. The new chapter is just wonderful and I look forward to more of the story. I have always loved the Hardcandy Colonel series.

I'm really enjoying this and am glad to see an update. I have to say that Rowdy Mortensen is one of my favourite OCs. Well done and can't wait for more

I'm so pleased you've posted more of this marvellous story at last. It's a joy of a chapter, Cjay. Wonderfully written with typical Cjay aplomb. As ever, I adore your terrific use of language.

Great to see T back, and Rowdy was great as always, as were the Asgard. Brilliant characters. B-but w-what about our hero Jack...?!!? What are you doing to the poor man? :-( More please!

Nice one and nice to see this one back in the system. Thanks.

I was just thinking about this story a couple days ago, considering digging it out. Glad to see a new chapter. :)

Well, I seem to remember liking this story...
;-)
Hope there'll be more soon!

Again, another fascinating premise. Please continue. I am enjoying your particular style of writing. Hooray for Jack!

Hope you're going to finish this story, as I love the Hard Candy Colonel stroies

This was a great chapter -- lol on the healing power of yo-yos. I hope you have another installment ready soon!

Chuffed to bits to see another chapter of this at last, Cjay, and what a terrific chapter too. I've so missed your writing, my friend, and am loving this story. More soon, please. Pretty please?! :-D

ohh! interesting!
nice mix of comedy with some serious tones.
I am definaly looking forward to more!
i love the lines
“What would O’Neill do?” Thor asked quietly.
“Eat cake?” Sam supplied wistfully.
“After the cake.” Thor responded dryly.

HAHAHAHAA
very well done
thankyou!
Smiles
:) ~Del

Still enjoying this. And poor Jack. Hope he and Teal'c are found.