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IDoNotJudge
2007-05-06
ch 1,
abuse“Oh really? What’s the square root of sixty four?”

“Eight. Now shut up and take your clothes off.”

hahaha perfect moment. loved the story, the sandle :) great job!
MyRedeemerLives
2007-05-03
ch 1,
abuseI love this one. :D
sdggdsf
2006-12-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw
Windy City Dreamer
2006-01-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL. Luved it. My fave line was this: “Eight. Now shut up and take your clothes off.” Hehe. Great
CSI Dork
2006-01-02
ch 1,
abusehey
i really liked this story, it was kind of cute.
i have no idea what the song is cos i have never heard of it (sorry) but it was still well written.
chibigirl626
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseOmg! I love the song soo much! And the story had a pretty good plot! Thanks for sharing!
singingstarryknights
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseLoved that. love that song. love your sandle. they are so ridiculously cute together. i absolutely love it.
AnnHoj
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseIt's me...love it. One of the best props for writers...alcohol. If some thing wouldn't quite work otherwise, just add some in there and things work out just how you want them. One shots really are so much easier to read.
daynaa.
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseintense!
i LOVE dance dance, and I love falloutboy haha
i was dancing to that song tonight haha
anyways, great story,
i liked it very much!
happy new years!
ObessedTWFan
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI guess great minds think alike, I was about to use this song, Great Job, I think you did way better than i would ever have done.
Cherrydrops12
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abusesweet
Jaye Black
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseAw...so cute...hmm Sara you bad girl... (not to say she isn't SO lucky...) Heh. Great job!!

~jaye~
CinnamonFaerie
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good.
Animegirl1129
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseSque! *goes to steal brothers Fall Out Boy CD...* hehehe *blasts Dance Dance* Glad hes not home...

And YAY! That was the awesomeness! Whoot!
Senorita Stokes
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseoh my god, that was freaking awesome. honestly, i like this story 453464574 times more than that story you recommended me. i love your stories, awesome job.
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