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| BumperSticker 2007-01-18 ch 8,  | abusecome on! where's the next chapter! i'v been waiten for like foreva to read it! wats goin on?! |
| xxmisslilangelxx 2006-10-07 ch 8, | abusenice chapter! i like how it so long and into detail ^-^ update soon kays? :] |
| Sailor2Moon 2006-09-29 ch 8, | abuseGreat job! I am definently wanting to know this secret that Dark has. Keep updating. |
| Heart's Door 2006-09-29 ch 8, | abuseA lovely chapter! I really enjoyed it; it was well-written/carried out. I liked how you showed the way some of the characters shanged. It wasn't abrupt, but rather smooth, really. I couldn't help but notice that there are 5 (or more) typos in your story, though. Anyway, glad that you updated! Until your next chapter, I'll be waiting! ^_^ |
| chocolatemaltesers 2006-09-28 ch 8, | abuselol. No wonder it's been so long! ^^ Hope you update soon! |
| AGENT KITS 2006-09-27 ch 8, | abuseYay! I beloved! And had to sign in! lol, I adored this! ^ ^ I would type more, but parents call. |
| Heart's Door 2006-09-04 ch 7, | abuseWhat a wonderful story. ^_^ It's well written and your writing style is very good. It can convey the different emotions in the story very well. I hope you can write the next chapter soon! |
| Eddie's FroG SplasH Princes... 2006-08-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseThe story is really good! It's one of my favorites! I hope you continue it, it's too good to stop. I hope Risa ends up with Krad or Satoshi and Riku with Dark! UPdate soon. |
| D.N.Virus Infection 2006-08-10 ch 7, | abuseI really like this story, please update it as soon as you can! |
| Shikey 2006-08-08 ch 7, | abuseThis story is great! Please update as soon as you can! |
| AGENT KITS 2006-07-26 ch 7, | abuseThat was good, I can't wait for some more moments between Dark and Riku. Such a kawaii couple...*sighs* |
| Runelesca 2006-07-24 ch 7, | abuse^-^ Yeah you updated! Though I noticed riku and dark didn't fight as much either. Does this mean they'll be coming a couple soon!^-^ |
| Sunfrost 2006-07-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseAwesome. |
| le candyknights 2006-06-30 ch 7, | abuse^^ I LOVE IT! Especially the part when Krad makes fun of Risa. (The previous chapters.) "It looks like a banana on a stick." (Or something like that. XD I LOVE it!) Literally made me laugh like CRAZEE. Well, Update Soon! (I have no right to say that, as you've updated 4 days ago. ^^) But still! Can't wait for next chapter! |
| chocolatemaltesers 2006-06-30 ch 7, | abuseAw! Sweet ^^ ! |