In three words: Per. Fect. Ion.

0-0 wow... kagome lost it...

oh god! what is with you and making me cry... i mean really! and im not just a wuss ... your a really great author. you use symbolysm beautifully and your writing is very mature. really i love it keep up the good work!

Amazing...that was some pretty deep stuff, and you set the mood with great skill. Great job!

hi

Wow...that definitely made me think. I give you a 10/10!

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. This flows, just like a "white river."

What a tapestry you've woven! You put everyone and in their proper place, and linked everything together in a most satisfactory fashion. This is really a remarkably inventive piece!

I must say... that was creepy, yet so beautiful that I couldn't look away. And I've always thought Rin was another incarnation of Kikyo and Kagome's soul.

WHOA O_O; what was that?! you must explain it! was kagome going a little nuts? did she lose it somehow? is she aware? wow... thats good! but its pretty out there... I'm hoping for more chapters and more explanations! :D *adds to story alert*

woah! I love it! Man..it was good! Like cheescake!

O.O Wow, a powerful yet simple fanfiction. I loved it. Great work, hope to read more of you stories. This is a one shot right?

wtf?

weird... good... but weird... >.

I don't think Kagome is crazy. I just think she's seen what we havent (err what the people in the story have cept for Rin) It was very well written and I can't wait until you update!

Hi i read the story and think it's really great, but there's one thing i don't get what is wlth the rungs and the white river. I'm sorry i'm dense.

Anyway ja ne till next time

P.S. Happy New Year