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IIO
2008-01-13
ch 14,
abusegreat story,i hope you continue it.
minez
2007-11-19
ch 9, anon.
abusehello, i jst wanted 2 say that i luv this fanfic. its so FUNNY!! and im not going 2 threaten u, dont worry, i respect that u will do it in ur own time. cya:)

p.s. im not a suck-up...
maddie
2007-08-14
ch 2, anon.
abusedid i read this already?!?!? i cant remember but im reading it again anyways!
maddie
2007-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abusehhm whats with this scroll they have to give to aang? well dont answer that. i guess ill find out later
maddie
2007-07-30
ch 13, anon.
abuseROFL! i cant believe he found out that she ate them!LOLOLOLOL!
maddie
2007-07-29
ch 10, anon.
abusesound? and why was she wearing the leather glove things for the first dinner?
talapadme
2007-07-28
ch 15,
abuseOh. That's why he was so mad. It was a birthday present that he got from his Uncle. That's sad. I hope the two of them get back on speaking terms soon.
Lots of Love,
talapadme
Watcher
2007-07-02
ch 15, anon.
abusePlease update soon. I've been waiting for months for the next chapter. Please don't abandon it.
She-walks-in-twilight
2007-06-16
ch 11,
abuseI absolutely am in love with this story-your writing style, the plot, the characters and their interaction. Out of all the good Zutara on here that I've read, this has to be in my top five.

You took a common plot and did make it completely, uniquely your own as well as extremely well written. Some of the scenes you've written, the way they're done-they make me giggle and squeal and re-read them over and over again. They're just perfect and wonderful. (The lemon candy was a great touch)

So anyway, needless to say I'd love you to continue writing this. Although I know what it's like to be busy and not have time for creative 'extras' I'd encourage you to keep on going and update whenever you can.
uffda1nat
2007-06-04
ch 15,
abuseWow. I am sincerely amazed and impressed by this story. It is written with more conviction and thought than any other zutara i've read in a long while. I really hope you update soon and keep writing!
white dragon fire
2007-05-29
ch 15,
abuselove the story. please update soon!
pinkpanther95
2007-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is good so far keep on goin i just found this stoy so yeah
Alexandra
2007-05-03
ch 15, anon.
abuseI love your story! It is very well written and organized and just about one of the best stories I've found in a WHILE... PLEASE KEEP WRITTING! YOU'RE SOO GOOD AT IT :)

Any who, I was just wondering if there will be any fluffy scenes between Zuko and Katara in any of the up coming chapters. *Hopes for fluff*
Oh, and what happens with Zhao? Will this turn out to be one of those fics. where Katara gets mentally scared from SOMETHING that happened to her. Then out of no where Zuko saves and comforts her. Which leads to them falling in love with each other...?

I hope not, stories that show Katara in that light are, needless to say, disturbing.

Dedicated Zutarian
momothelemur
2007-04-20
ch 15,
abuseI love the way you have adapted quite a common storyline and made it completely your own. I've loved every chapter and I hope you haven't stopped writing this. But, if you have, I just want to say thanks for such a great story :)
- Momo
Anonymous B
2007-04-18
ch 15, anon.
abuseYour writing style is amazing!! I don't know how old you are but you could write a book right now and I bet you would become a best selling author! This story goes the same route as many other stories that involve Zuko and Katara, but the writing technique makes it so much more intriguing and interesting. It also sticks to their characters and personalities, which many people lose through the story. All in all, I think your story is amazing and I hope you're stil writing it because I can't wait to read more!! ;)
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