Nicely done!

Oh wow, another great story, and sadly, another one that hasn't been updated in a while. I do hope you update these stories soon, they are wonderful and I'm enjoying them a lot!

Aww; it's incomplete!

Im likenit so far

im geting tierd of saying this to everybody but DAMN YOU FOR THE CLIFFY!

oh, interesting! deciding he definately wanted to take up the leader position! hard times are coming his way-i'm just guessing here, going off on a limb, but it's a story right? something has gotta happen! not that something hasn't happened already...it's really exciting and suspensful so don't think i'm bashing you!

can't wait to see what you're going to throw his way though!

Splinter doesn't seem to happy...he seems accepting-sort of but not happy...did he just not want this moment to come! i mean really, what does this moment mean for Leo? do his brothers know what he's talking about! will they support him! i sure hope so!

wondafal job!

update SOON!

I'm liking this story a lot. You are a good writer. Update soon. I may not be able to review after this because I will be at my house and my computer there won't let me review. But I will try to read it at least. This story rocks.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

I thought that it was great! And the end of the chapter was so cute. I can't wait to see what more you have planned. Update soon!

Thank you! Thank you so much for fiction centered on Leonardo that actually features Leonardo, and not some bipolar fangirl caught in his body! Thank you! *falls to her knees*

Uhm *cough* What I mean is: Works as a one-shot, sounds promising as the beginnig of a larger story. I like it. Added to my story alert list.

Very nicely written. I think you captured the heart of Leo rather well, and his obvious sudden realization with how closely he and his family dance with death perfectly penned.

I like!

Be blessed,

Rene'

Whoa, way cool! This has great promise, so much that I'm going to have to beg you to update asap. I love Leo centric, and I haven't read a why-he-became-leader story yet. Please keep it up!

COOL! UPDATE SOON!

Yay! It's so good! *is happy* I love tidy little one-shots like this, especially when they star cute little chibi-turtle ninjas! Will you do one for Raphael? Please, pretty please?

Nice exploration of what younger Leo would be going through following that harrowing event. Yeah, how would those kids process this at that age? This could stand alone but I'm glad you're planning to expand on it.

GW

Great story so far. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for my favorite Turtle. Update soon. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,

Shell