Truthfully...you might want to keep this to yourself and who I presume to me "Kayz". That's doesn't mean you wrote badly, I'm not saying that, but honestly this has little to do with Harry Potter. You could easily make a boy character for Kayz at some boarding school and such on Fictionpress with the personality you gave for Remus. It would appreciated a lot more over there.

That's SOO awesome!! I know I probably said this earlier BUT ITS SO FREAKING GOOD! (snickers) I hit a 4th year, serves him right, the little pervert!

I knew Remus lurved me and I lurv him(huggles him), DUH lmao, I'm an obssessive fangirl.. but in a good way :D Great job MoMo!

MOMO WROTE A STORY!

OMG! +has spasms+

That... was magical... xD... Even though Remus is secretly in love with me... BAHAHAHAHA!

well... if I'm there... I guess. Oh well.

I liked it. ^_^

You should write that pirate one. xD that would be pretty sweet.

LOVE!