I'm happy Link killed him (( Though I knew Link would the moment that old hag told him )) I'm gonna call Greed guy Dark, Since names don't stick with me too well >.>"


Though I did did feel kinda bad for the guy. D: Ganon can be so crual XD

All n all I LOVED it *v* Poor Link T^T How I love your suffering >D And so Dark gets points for that >;3

Medizinfrau seems interesting... oh, btw, Onyx Blood is me, just my alternate account. Woops, forgot to log out before I posted reviews as them, since I usually don't use that account for anything... Anyways, seeing Dark kinda awkward is - dunno if you'll believe me- kinda cute~
But then you remember he's a deranged, demented, sadistic monster.
...But a cute one at that. Yah, I'm a major DL fan... XD
*AK*
P.S. This story might be YEARS old, but a work of art is a work of art...

Oh poor Link... and Gawd Dark, have you been skipping out on your meds or something?!
Not a fan of rape, but at least you capture the true effects of it and your writing is plausible and easy to read. Believe me, I've come across people who can barely write a line of dialogue without confusing their readers into the pits of hell... O_o;
*AK*

O_o;
S-Scary...
But awesome...
EVERYONE LOVES A SADISTIC DARK LINK! ;D
*AK*

yay navi is dead thanks dark

I just read this story now, and I know you wrote it two years ago, but I think it's definitely worth a review.

I couldn't have liked this story more. It's very bittersweet, and I love how you have all your characters being insane in their own strange way. We clearly know Dark Link has problems, and it's nice that you've given him some sort of background, some reason he's so full of no feelings. It's funny how what Ganondorf's done to him is the same thing as what he's done to Link. I like that he realizes this while he's dying.

The first person point of view you have here is great. You have his thoughts well written, and I like in the second chapter how you have him thinking strange things, like seeing Navi's blood is "Lovely, lovely, lovely." Also, you write the yaoi scenes very well. They're not extremely graphic, but they're not really clean either.

There is a few things I would change, like how Dark Link says to Link, "I'm going to ** you." Something about that makes me feel iffy, especially for a story in the Zelda fandom. And how you have Dark Link often calling Ganondorf "Meanie-head." I like that he has a deep hatred for Ganondorf, but the nickname seems off.

Overall, though, this was really enjoyable. I'm going to check if you have any more stories.

Great work.

Oh, my God. This story... was astounding. It'll definately never have any competition, ever. Its uniqueness amazed me throughout my entire time reading it. This fanfic... is a masterpiece. (And that term is not to be taken lightly!)

I absolutely loved this story. You are an excellent writer of sorts, and I simply adore

ssaaddiisstt :o butImnotonetotalkbecausesoamI. Yay DLxL >

wow. such an interesting, indepth fic. It's an interesting twist with the whole thing being from DL's point of view. I greatly enjoyed your story.

AWSOMENESS!

this was very enjoyable, but it made me sad. i didn't like that he died right after he heard the entire truth. and i really liked the picture you drew of DL and the great fairy in the bath. he was cool there.

Well honestly I didn't think this fic was crappy- I like it! So Link is the one that killed him, right? I felt bad for him.. and DL too - good job!

so who's crying then DL? hmm..

nice chapter - very interesting- he met baba yaga