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| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 12,  | abuseWoah! Cool! She lives again MWHAHAHAHAHA! Go Jaina! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 8, | abuseOh, it's okay, girl. Your gonna be alright. Vader, dude, Blah, blah, blah! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 6, | abuseWimpy?! Okay, dude, there are certain lines you don't cross. ESPECIALLY with a sixteen year old girl! Oh, Jaina better putting a bit of a smack down on Vader soon! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 4, | abuseAsk her! Ask her! Ask her! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abuseOh, cool! This is better then the first! I like how you're maturing Jaina. Yeah, she definitely sounds like a sixteen year old. "Technically". Oh, boy! |
| Nelarun 2006-03-28 ch 13, | abusecool... Nelarun of Australia |
| Cleo 2006-03-21 ch 13, anon. | abusejeez trish you drive a hard bargain. Your poor future-husband! what can I say? I was totally hoping that Jaina would die and let Darth win (HAHAHA) but, obviously it'd never be true. See what you can do to a girl's fantasies?! This one was good ... short but good. And short is a good thing in my book |
| louise lopez 2006-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseit just keeps getting interesting and interesting. it's like i dont wanna stop but i really have to coz now i have to eat dinner. it was really great! may you be the future star wars REAL author. |
| you-know-who 2006-01-20 ch 13, anon. | abuseOkay, I'll be honest. I like the first one better. Poor Jaina she must have been really hurt! Still, I like it. Signed, you-know-who |
| jedihooplah 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI'll be candid with you, this story was not quite as good as the first. You had an interesting idea to begin with, but the lack of detials and the jumpy writing made it confusing and a bit boring. I did like the little bit about the choice that Jaina made at the end. -Jedi Hooplah |