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| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 8, | abuseOh, that was nice and ominious! Back off, Vader. Unless you Want to get your butt kicked by a seventeen year old girl. Which, frankly, would be rather embarrasing. (Goes off to read more) |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 6, | abuseWoah, woah, woah! Slow down and freeze!...Oh dear. I get the bad feeling dear Vader is going to show up...AGAIN! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 4, | abuseYep, definitely Tusken Raiders. Anything comes on them, they kill it...or get killed themselves. |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abuseOh, cause THAT's intelligent. Let's hunt Tusken Raiders on foot! (shivers) this isn't gonna end well. |
| Nelarun 2006-03-28 ch 8, | abuseargh the suspense...lol |
| you-know-who 2006-01-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseOkay, I gotta tell ya dat d chapters are kinda short. The story was kinda short too. Adventure on Ilum is always the best for me! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 8, | abuseI love this chapter! Darth Vader was ** off! I love it! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 7, | abuseGo Jaina! For an apprentice shes really good! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 6, | abuseYey! Hope Obi-Wan's plan works! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 5, | abuseKeep it up! I'm getting pretty addicted! XD |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 4, | abuseI like it! Please make longer chapters. Keep it up! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 3, | abuseI like this story very much. Keep it up! |
| dracoandhermionerock 2006-01-11 ch 2, | abuseI usually read DHr stories but this is a very good Star Wars story. Keep it up! |
| Kyla 2006-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this story will turn out good. Keep up the good work! |