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The Tyrant Hamster
2008-08-04
ch 5,
abuseThere are three parts I especially love about this last chapter. The first is "As for Arson, he had been given strawberries from everyone and had given strawberries to everyone", aah, the art of simplicity XD. The second is the mention of "The Little Book of Bunny Suicides", because I've totally read that and bought it for a friend for a present ^^! And the third is where you went through what everyone got, I always enjoy taking stock of good things, and you made it both funny and touching, although I do feel kinda sorry for Reiko, but then again I have a story in my favourites where he has a happy ending. Speaking of which, this is going in there as well, it's way just too awesome not to XD.
The Tyrant Hamster
2008-08-04
ch 4,
abuseI love what you do to the fourth wall here, which should be no surprise since it's the same thing I based two entire stories around, hehehe XD. This chapter contains one of those memorable moments for me, I remembered Agatha somewhat, but the part where Dante is asked to list negative things about his friends and seems to be stumped, then turns out to be overwhelmed by the choice, and goes on a rant, I remember this fondly, even after all of however long it's been since I reviewed this before with no account XD. Hehehe, this is great, the out-of-universe things you do with this chapter owns, and I though "Commit incest!" was freaking genius for the way you spun it, hahaha, so win.
The Tyrant Hamster
2008-08-04
ch 3,
abuseHehehe, I absolutely love this chapter, I really can't dilute the fact, it's awesome XD. You have this crazy old woman, which is funny, and Dante being all OOC in a funny way, and that in itself is good, but what you then do which I adore, is that you interspace their conversation with their wandering thoughts, which in and of themselves are amusing, but also it makes it feel like advancing from Agatha asking Dante if he's seen her dog to Dante asking what said dog looks like is a real triumph. I am in awe of your ability to make the daftness of it all feel so convincing XD. The angsty stuff was excellent, it really was, but oh man, the humour was so show-stealing. I love this fic ^^!
The Tyrant Hamster
2008-08-04
ch 2,
abuseThere's that angst you were talking about, hehehe, chapter 1 seemed to be pretty much just playful, I'd forgotten about what you said in the pre-chapter notes until towards the end here.

This was still mostly comedy, and funny too XD. I love how you roll in new people and more than double the cast, as if you hadn't proven you can cause enough chaos with just Dante, Vergil and Trish. Arius was hilarious to me cus I didn't expect him, he hopped onto a desk just like in his boss battle, used his most cheesy line AND THEN just died, hahaha XD. Also, "gingerbread man flesh" wins awards for the vivid imagery it conjures up.
The Tyrant Hamster
2008-08-04
ch 1,
abuseHahaha, I love this stuff, I really do, you have a knack, if not more, for clashing with the established personalities of the characters while keeping enough familiarity that what you end up with is naked abuse of the cast and world, but it's so damned funny XD. Seriously, almost anyone can pull a cheap unexpected-behaviour gag, and it's easy to write something that's a far cry from how people normally act, and we call that poor writing, but you do it in a way that's good, it's like a counterweight to everything normally expected, it wouldn't be so funny if the characters weren't SO unlike this in the first place. The bit with writing on Dante's face was my favourite part by the way XD.
Eric Draven201
2007-12-25
ch 3,
abuseAll I could do is laugh... its just so funny!
Eric Draven201
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseI'm likin' this. Its so funny and you're not afraid to go there with the cliches and other references (and I love that).

Its gettin' me geared up for Christmas
GryronInferno46
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseThis funny.
You are my rival on massive authors notes.
Fear my wrath
Chaos Sparda
2006-01-11
ch 5,
abuseAnother good Chapter. Not as entertaining as the last but it definitely had it's moments.Ex. Dante trying to go through with the whole incest thing. Twas very good.
Chaos Sparda
2006-01-11
ch 4,
abuseOh my fucking god.ROFLMAO. I hope you are happy. I quite literally could not stop laughing for 10 minutes. I damn near choked to death. "Yes I know what to do. Commit incest" I have never been a fan of the incest thing but that was so funny. Just recalling what happened to write this review sends me into fits of laughter.
Chaos Sparda
2006-01-11
ch 3,
abuseNo evil old people are attacking.I have family like that. Damn Alzheimers. Twas funny then kind of sad. I liked it.
Veronica
2006-01-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseOh god, this was priceless. XD I want to start from 5th chapter to 1st briefly, because I’m dyslexic: (spoilers for those who want to read reviews before story content)

5th)- funny, it had me in stitches. From the gifts that Arson received, to what he gave. He actually didn’t lose out did he? XD
Vergil giving Lady a playboy bunny suit, omg, somehow I can see it. *chuckle* And, the horror on her face too.
Lucia giving baguettes to the boys and in turn beat each other up. Oh goodness, that’s hilarious. Wouldn’t that be funny if capcom used baguettes for a funny weapon? Maybe VJ style.

Ok, wrapping it up to the other chapters, because there’s just so much here:

“Well it’s difficult sometimes,’ Dante whimpered, his eyes watering from the overly hard smack. ‘Mom used to dress like that from time to time. Then Dad would get pleased and they’d run upstairs. Sometimes Mom even had a whip. I never really understood why Dad would get all happy though. I’d be terrified!’”
Omg. Remember when we used to write that wonderful fic with the entire family and Eva’s penchant for whips and chains? XD memories!

The little old lady you introduced earlier on was priceless. That was really good. I thought this was a fantastic story and you know very well you are great with humour. It’s a great talent when you can make people smile.

--xo
JaneGray
2006-01-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseThe fict was funny, with gags at times a bit too odd, but mostly genuinely amusing. Chapter 4 in particular was interesting for the way Dante's attitude is presented. And the ending was a truly nice touch, happy but not sappy ^_^.
In short, this is a good fict and I had a good time reading it.

Just a note: Lady doesn't wear a skirt, she wears shorts.
nicola-235
2006-01-04
ch 5,
abuseThis is retartedly funny. I love it. Good luck.
rose-mirror21
2006-01-03
ch 5, anon.
abuseLove it! Well done and good read. Keep up the good work. ~p.k.(PoutyKitten)
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