Nice. I love Gaz, but I honestly really liked this too.

OOC? Yes. Funny? Also yes. :-D

You know, I've actually thought about this scene too, and how, while one could read it as Gaz being all horrible, we really don't know WHAT the circumstances are-just that Dib wanted some cereal and Gaz ate it. Does that make her greedy? Maybe, but then, what gives Dib the right to call it? Maybe she claims all the cereal is hers and deprives Dib, but then, maybe she's honest and Dib DOES tend to eat all the cereal and leave her none. In other words, this is basically just a normal sibling fight, not a horrible Gaz-kills-Dib situation, which I think is somewhat close to the point you were trying to make. XD Nice work!

Another one of those fics that's well written, but leaves an icky feeling with me. Weird.

BTW, I think the language would boot this up to a T. Just my two cents.

I liked it, except for the fact that Dib put the cardboard in the garbage, when something like that CLEARLY belongs in the recycling bin. Go ahead! RECYCLE!

Gaz IS a bully, and I like how you write her, even if it's not my favourite.

I just wanted to say that I've read alot of your stories and I like the way they all seem to have a point to prove

This is really good. I really like your point of view and analyis. I thought the same thing. Very good, I like this fic, it really has a lot of meaning, especially with the title. Good story!

I like Dib calling Gaz a bitch. It reminds me of a friend from elementary school I had who was very unpopular, and when this one girl kept bothering him and insulting him day in, day out, couldn't even concentrate on the project we were working on, and he finally stood up to her and called her a son of a bitch...only to be mocked for calling her "son of a." Sigh. What idiots they were; they didn't even think FOR ONCE that maybe, just MAYBE he chose his words INTENTIONALLY, for she certainly was anything but "ladylike." Hypocrisy...how I hate thee.

Ahem-where was I? Oh, yes-excellent characterization, Dibsthe1, great going.

hahaha...this is odd...cereal is evil...

How could you hate Gaz?

*sobs as her favorite character is made into an evil botch*

Heh, that's actually what happens in canon though...

Heh. I like how Dib doesn't even Care about Gaz's reaction in this one and just leaves her to her bitching. Reminds me of how he is towards the end of the series. After a while it all just becomes background noise.

Dude, I love Dib just as much as the next person, but... Sheesh, Gaz totally has doom powers! Did you even SEE the episode with the demon pig? She was levitating, surounded by the souls of the damned and her eyes were glowing red! And all that creepy stuff she did in GS2... DOOM POWERS, I TELL YOU! *claws at her own face*

WOW you really hate Gaz. If nothing else, I admire your UNDYING LOATHING! *glares nonetheless, blood seeping from the recently self-inflicted wounds around her deep-set, bloodshot eyes* Loooathiiing... o.o

Invader Zim OWNS your PATHETIC human soul!

ERZLO

I like the fact that Dib is mature and reasonable and wising up to Gaz’s childish behavior.

I don’t visit this section anymore except to read your fics, and Senri’s. So I didn’t know the cereal comment was a popular thing to write about. Weird. You’re right that the Gaz in this fic is much closer to canon than most of the stuff you see at ffnet. In fact, she’s dead on.

"Regardless of age, gender, or following, a bully is still nothing more than that... a BULLY"

An excellent point to note...and I like how Dib just went for a poptart and promptly forgot the whole incident. At least SOMEone grew out of holding grudges and throwing fits.