OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SO CUTE!

Oh. *dreamy sigh/gasp* How lovely! That was so beautiful. I love this couple so much. As I've said, they've survived childhood together, two inter-galactic wars, and despite one defection-related setback, Dearka and Yzak will undoubtedly be living together until they go peacefully into the afterlife.

I loved the dialogue in this fic, though short, it was very sweet. -^^- Well written, very descriptive, but not too long and airy. I love it. Good job! ^^

Excellent drabble. They're both very in-character here...and that's an idea I haven't seen before, Ezaria's death after the war. Nothing can last for eternity, not even perfection. 'Tis a good lesson.
Your writing style is admirable. ^.^ I hope to see other works from you!