wow this is super good
i cant wait for the next one
keep up the fabulous work

you just had to end it there. GR! ugh, well anyways you have an awesome writing style, if i dont like the story or writing, i don't review so thankyou for writing an orginal story based fanfiction 'cheers whistles claps' so update soon

AH I love it please update ASAP! I am literally freaking out! AH I love it so so much!

*Smh* I feel like this is one of those asian dramas on TV when they drag the relationship out--like you have to wait until the 20th episode until they admit there is affection between the two parties. I'm kind of annoyed because this is listed as romance for S and K. I'm sure that they will eventually have feelings, but I have to admit this is a bit too long.

Of course, I don't expect an impromptu explosion of fluff and love, but you've had 20 chapters to progress their acquaintanceship. Sorry for my border-whining, please take no offense. I enjoy your style and art of writing, I mean if I didn't-I wouldn't have been able to read 20 straight chapters even though it didn't really do much for Sess and Kag >.> Please update soon!

-m* [P.S. Sorry for the long review :P ]

Can't wait for more Sesshy!!

lol more Sess/Kag action lol still makes me wonder how she fell of that guy lol i can only imagine lol cant wait for more!

What I'm about to write is supposed to be supportive criticism so please don't take offense or change what you are doing unless you feel the need to. <3

I have to admit after the first couple of chapters I had to force myself to keep reading. Some of the stuff seemed rather.. unnecessary to have in the story, and I nearly stopped reading it altogether but with these past couple of chapters I'm glad that I didn't.

And maybe it's just me, but I can say that I truly do look forward to your next update. :)

(I know that wasn't very detailed but I can't really pinpoint what it was about those chapters that turned me off so much. I just felt you should know..i dunno i'm weird like that haha.)

oh! Sorry to hear about your laptop! I hope it's okay!

So glad you updated! ^_^ Interesting turn -I was wondering what was wrong with Kaede. *makes face* They're as bad as I am about listening in time to their intuitions, ne? *sighs* Trying not to hold my breath for how Sesshomaru is going to save Kagome -for I have faith he will. Curious as to why she lost sense of his location... I'm guessing he's hiding somehow but look forward to finding out. ^_^

oh I like~ plz do so update soon!

UPDATE!

please update soon.

good chapter as always.

funny

:)

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ps, great story, love your writing.
~Kyin