Beautiful weaving in of his past with his present. Like Hermione, I assumed that Snape knocked her out - it would seem that way from her perspective, and that's all the worse when we find out how much trouble he went (and what he gave up) to keep her alive.

good first chapter, exciting, with a hint of foreshadowing. Very nice. Please update!

Yes! another story! Can't wait to see were this leads.

no! please don't leave it there - anything could happen now! hopefully you won't make your poor readers wait too long for an update...

Seems interesting!

A very intriguing start. I look forward to more. What is the timeframe here - how old is Hermione? You tell us it's been "many, many years" - how old does that make Snape?

great start! can't wait for more!

kara

Oh, good beginning! I'm looking forward to the rest of this one. Did Snape hit her with the green light or did someone else?

wow this is brillaint cant wait to read more

*Oogles* sounds very promising, keep it up!

cya

DK

amazing job!

hmm interesting very interesting do continue soon! :D

Hmm...interesting beginning. Please update soon.

Very interesting beginning - looking forward to more!

Interesting start - cheers to you for embarking on a new story!