OH MY GOSH! LOVE IT!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE! I LOVE IT! SO much heart in it, it made me cry when Winry was so heartbroken! PLEASE FINISH!

OMG this is awsome. I think this is the best fan fic i have ever ever ever read. I like the vivid verbs and how it made my heart POUND when i read it,
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Hm. Interesting. Good description.

o! I wanna read the rest!!

Hum. The view and theme of lonlieness is very strong with this one. There were a few notable typos,but they were simply careless mistakes. Poor Al seems simply ignored all the time, and yet he's so huge. a question rises as well. How was all wearing this 'strange clothes' if he's, well, a body of huge armor. It would have been a good idea to give a discription of this strange clothes. There's more to that curcus and that military guy then meets the eye, is there not? Well, I look forward to more, no I must go back to work, note that you have a very developed usage of personification.

good and bad. The sad thing is she didn't figure it out when the old woman said shadows of her past would once again show but not bring happiness but great pain. I hope he says goodbye this time. I'll talkt oyou later. Arigato and ja ne!

this is very good, I am very interesting in your fic, I hope to see the next update soon

Awesome start, I hope the rest of the story is this good ^^

I think its cute so far ^^ Very awesome on the details describing her mournings over Ed