Nicely done! ;)

I like this. Good characterizations and mood. I always like to read little "missing moments" like this.

cool. I like to see a little bit of Lando.

This is pretty good. It's seems a little... I don't want to say tacky, but I am at a loss for words. But do not get me wrong: it WAS a good story; it gave some new depth to the characters, which is absolutely essential to a good story. The only thing that held this down was the dialog. It was not bad, but some of the things they said seemed to be a little out of character. I think Lando should have been a little more stressed about the situation. Keep writing!

Nicely done. I haven't read any stories about the first meeting between Lando and Luke where they actually talked. Lando is perceptive. Luke's thoughts are perfect. He's mulling over what happened and what Vader said, but the shock is too great for him to begin thinking yet about the implications of Vader being his father. Good story!