This story amd its sequel were in the top 3 stories that made me want to write fanfiction. Masterfully done!

A beautiful ending to this great story. I really liked this story and i want to thank you for writing it, so thank you very much. Since i read that sequel i hope there will be a story that will tell of revans return after her adventures beyond the outer rim.

Haha i really liked the Bastila and Canderous scene. He really got her! The scene with mission was also very good. HK was himself again!^^ a good chapter

I really like how you gave the star forge a greater role, how you portrayed the temptation. Its been a bit missing in the game, this temptation, you don´t really see it in the game. Its a good idea and well written.

good chapter! liked it, especially carths thoughts...it adds something the game haddn´t. Not that i know...i always played male revan lightside, but this story is good, believable and entertaining. I really like the depth of it.

An interesting scene with carths wife...i like it. great writing this and Revans dream

good HK scene in this chapter. the scene with canderous was good. I liked how revan and carth interacted in the last chapters, the conversations were deep and well written. The scene with bastila was well written.

didn´t somebody somwhere once wrote: "Listen you hairless wookie..."...and so began one of the greatest romances of all time.? Good story...funnily i just found this story after reading through broken promises. Now i´m gonna read through this one while waiting for updates on broken promises. keep up the good work.

WOW!! This was amazing! One of the best Kotor fics out there.
The emotion and the scenes were described perfectly so you could visualise everything. Character development was great also. Overall, the whole thing was awesome.
Brilliant work!

WOW I LLOVE THAT STORY OF YOURS!

Oh, I think I'm going to enjoy reading this story... it's too late for me to read it all now, but I will later!

This has GOT to be the best KotOR I fic I've ever read, and I've read a lot of them, let me tell you. (I'm obsessive like that...).

I liked the fact that, as you said, you never actually described Revan's physically looks. It made things kind of easier for me as a reader not to jump out and say, "Hey Revan does not have [insert eye color, hair color, skin tone ect.]!" (Although I feel like a hyprocrite; I'm doing that in my own story, LOL.)

I also like how you didn't just let Revan automatically get over rediscovering her identity. People are always saying that since she (and yes, I'm using "she"; I don't give a heck about cannon) fought in the war, lead an army, was a Sith Lord (Lady if you want to be technical about it) that's she'd either be strong enough to just get over it, would revel in it, or just plain wouldn't care.

Plus there's the fact that the game never really dwelled on her coming to terms with the "discovery". One minute your playing through as just another Jedi, the next minute "BANG" your Dark Lord/Lady of the Sith, and Carth's the only one who really stops to think about it. (Mr. Paranoia...)

It's always seemed to me though that it's not something you can get over in three chapters; even if you were already Darkside, it's gonna take some consideration. So, anyway to sum up my forever long rant, I like how you actually focused on it, and how Rev had to let the two parts of her reconcile.

I have to admit I'm kind of dissapointed that the scene with her leaving and her reasons behind it aren't here, but I'm hoping it'll be in the sequel. Now that I've officially started being as long-winded as Jolee, I'm off to read the sequel.

Good Work!

-The Graceless Jedi

Hi there. I just spent 'literally' two days reading all of the chapters to this story. WOW. I can say, faves for sure. I really do hope to see more of your stuff here on FF, I'm off to read more of your stuff now. WOW!!

I actually love this story! Character depth and interactions are perfect, and written brilliantly.
Sorry I can't be more specific- this is just a fantabulous read!

I loved this story! It really sets a crazy high standard for this sort of fic. Nice job!