Sokratis you are stupid that link dont work and you are very retarded you dumb **, you want to blame people because you got no skill of your own you suck at writing you fat old bum.

I really enjoyed this story and path that you are taking it hope to read more of this story in the future.

http://paintheclown./2009/11/20/team-8-chapter-4/

great story and i was wondering is there going to more chapters coming out soon.

If you do not update this soon I will hunt you down and force you to write more.

Really good... update soon please?

Wow, i just finsihed reading through this story for the third time!

Still awsome,

i dont know how the hell you do it! Every chapter is just stupidly perfect!

If there was some way that this could be made into an anime or manga i would pay any amont of money!


I wish i could give you the reveis that you wanted all helpfull and stuff, but im no writer and to me its all perfect anyway,

Its been about a year since your last update hough...i know you said that you dont want reviews that say 'UPDATE SOONER!!'
but a year is just a bit much you know?

I hope you dont drop this story, i recon this is one of the Top 5 naruto fanfics on this thing,

Of corse i will wait for 20 years for the next chapter if i have to, its just too good!


Anyway im done now,

I really really really really love how this is going :)

I've been reading your story for awile now and i really like. Sorry i can't login right now and i didn't review before.
About the ten/tem fight, if kurenai had thought her genjutsu why didn't she use it against tem?

Please update this story! I love it!

I really enjoyed reading this so far and I look forward to reading the next chapter whenever you post it [hopefully sometime soon as its been forever since you last updated] Thanx~! XD

signed,
Naya-chan ^-^

You said in a previous chapter that if this was abandoned, you'd post the plot outline. Well, I still hope this is ongoing, but if it is abandoned, please do that soon? This story is amazing, it would be so much of a pity just to leave it hanging like that!

Loved the last part, with Neji being so ... civil? Nice? Dunno ...
But yeah, it's awesome. All the fights are really realistic, and Naruto manages to be really strong without being overpowerful (he still gets beaten by Lee most times when sparring, which I find hilarious as Naruto bet Gaara, while Lee lost ... glad that no serious injuries were sustained in your story!)

Also really liked how Naruto can get rid of seals like that ... though Neji's scarred, at least it won't be evil scarring anymore! Can Naruto do this for Sasuke too? Cause everyone knows that Sasuke's a prick, and that he would be much less of a prick if he had never gone to Orochimaru ...

Can't wait for the next chpater! Or whatever ... you're still writing your HP story on that forum, so I think it's safe to assume you're still writing?

Please update soon?

i loved the ichiraku scene!
wow this story is great!
Please update soon~

HAHAHA! I laughed so hard when Naruto decked Sasuke, I can't wait to continue on this is a great story you have going here.

After finally getting it all read up to this point, all I have to say is...

Wow.

If ever I have read a simply awe-inspiring story period regardless of the media in which it was presented, it was squashed after reading yours. If you ever decide to pick this one back up, I look forward to reading what twists your AU throws our way.

You have made a fan out of me. I bow to your literary capacity.