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Hui-Fang 2008-07-25 ch 18,	abuseThis story is... err... I can't explain it, but it's left chills all over my skin. And believe me, I want to read more. Update when you can, ok?
X ANTI NARUxSAKU X 2008-07-25 ch 18,	abuseTHIS IS VERY GOOD! IM SO FAVING IT! UPDATE SOON OR ILL KILL YOU! SERIOUSLY THOUGH GOOD JOB, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...ACTUALLY I NEVER READ UNFINISHED NARUTO STORIES SO YOUR IS THE FIRST. YOU SHOULD BE HONORED I NEVER CAN STAND READING UNFINISHED STORIES BUT ILL MAKE AN EXCEPTION SINCE THIS IS SO AWESOME! I LOVE IT! NARUXHINA FOREVER X ANTI NARUXSAKU X
Oceanwind 2008-07-24 ch 9,	abuseNo matter how many times I read this story (and this must be the fourth or fifth time) it never ceases to amuse me at how the Aburame speak so formally, even to their close relatives. Hehe.
Herooftimes 2008-07-24 ch 18,	abuseawesome! haha, seriously, that WE ARE Legion thing had me rollin with laughs. Did you read that story too? I REALLY liked haku helping out the hokage with the battle..sigh..i almost thought they might get out without any permanent injuries. Sorry the action was so challenging, but you still did a great job with it! wow, putting haku in, didnt even notice him... and good idea for why shino spared him. wow, never thought about firecrackers like that before...
IntellectualShinobi 2008-07-23 ch 18, anon.	abuseI really love your fic. It is well written, really interesting, and to be honest, I like your version of the story better than the actual show. Keep up the good work!
katyperry 2008-07-23 ch 18,	abuseWow. I have spent the last few days reading this fanfiction and I must say, your story is probably the most well-written story I have yet to read, with much regard to character development, plot and a rich vocabulary. I was also quite amazed at how well you portrayed Naruto--as misunderstood in a sense. Well, suffice it to say that I cannot wait for the next chapter! You certainly have my respect as a writer. ;) ~katyperry
Neccor 2008-07-23 ch 18,	abuseGreat set of battle scenes. It seems to me that Shino would rather take someone alive than kill. My only question is what happens to the sand trio? It is never expliained on what happens to them. Do they high tail it out of Konoha, or do they stay and wait for the ANBU, explain to the Hokage what happened? It's a litle thing hat I noticed is never explained in any fic. Other than that, here's to getting baa-chan
Shien Akari 2008-07-23 ch 18, anon.	abuseNice one. Keep writing like this and you will easily gain a large fanbase. Good job.
Hamilcar 2008-07-22 ch 18,	abuseFirst, I need to start off by saying that I loved, absolutely loved, Haku in this chapter. I was quite on edge when it looked as though he would be impaled by Orochimaru's sword. Marvelous way of integrating a minor character. :D The real center-piece of this chapter, though, was the fight between Gaara, Naruto and company. Shikamaru (lovely, lazy Shikamaru) was absolutely spot on in characterization and I thought the battles themselves were well balanced - it never felt as though one side or the other was complete assured victory. There was a good amount of back and forth between all the various battling groups - and it was especially pleasing to see how far Hinata has come as the result of the AU changes. In short, another marvelous job. This continues to be one of the best alternate stories I've read in any series. Keep up the tremendous work.
xt 2008-07-22 ch 11, anon.	abuseoh, and i'm VERY SURE you quoted Han Solo from Star Wars and Morpheus from the Matrix in this fic, deliberately if not unintentionally. I liked those quotes.
xt 2008-07-22 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis fic makes me want to eat ramen, run 5 rounds around konoha, eat more ramen, visit the kunai shop, and eat ramen. in other words, i like it a lot. Only thing is, i think Shino speaks with a vocabulary a little too complex, it is strange. other than that it is great! keep writing more!
Lord Akuma 2008-07-21 ch 18,	abuseThis kicks tons of . Grammar is great. Plot is just damn good. I also want to see Hiashi have a S class fire jutsu shoved up his .
InuFanJinx 2008-07-21 ch 18,	abuseI, for one, like the changes that you made to the characters and story line! Like you said, it is AU, plus the fact that Naruto is actually with a sensei that helps him and a group that really cares about him!! I hope you get a chance to update again soon!
CobaltHeart 2008-07-21 ch 18,	abuseI've spent the last 2-3 days reading this, and I must say, I love it. The chunnin exams was my favorite part so far, that and the recent battle with Gaara. I can't imagen what else this is going to happen. Is your story going to follow into Shippuden, or end at the time skip? I've seen you mention the Akatstuki a few times throughout this. It made me happy when Lee didn'y get as badly injured as the last time.
RevanGrandMasteroftheGreyJe... 2008-07-20 ch 18,	abuseThis is great story. I can see you take great care in making sure everything is just right in the story. I enjoyed reading it so far and I hope to see it one completed but take you time I don't want to see it ruined because you rushed a section.

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