SWET! This story rocks! I wonder what Shino's clan thinks about him being teamed up with Naruto?

This is getting rather interesting. I had high hopes for this story given how good Nightmares of Future Past is, and so far everything I could have wanted is coming through. Large emotional differences are made logically, huge divergences in appearance are also logical given how the story is written (Naruto doesn't just unexpectedly decide orange is a horribl color like in some stories) the emotional impact of both Naruto's treatment at the hands of the shop holders and Kurenai's outrage at such treatment, is also handled realy well.

I'm certainly glad to have you on author alerts.

Please e-mail your responces very quickly to me,please. I would like to see Team 8 go on the wave arc instead of Team 7 and I wonder how Kurenai can handle Zabuza and I suspect Naruto will change Zabuza and Haku like he did in the manga. Will Zabuza and Haku will die in this fic like in the manga and please don't let Zabuza and Haku die in this fic.

Hm...very good. I like the direction of this story. Although this chapter seemed a bit slow, I recognize the fact that proper framework for a story is a good thing.

The fact that you got so many reviews could simply be explained by the fact that by now you have a pool of readers that come back when ever you update, just like me :), And since I already wasted three days to read all the manga I am interested to see how this story goes on.

And I also want to see how will you manage to keep this story from being a retelling of the manga while still trying to keep the same time related events. Oh one question are you going to have any romance in the story?

Great story.

Please tone down mentioning the mysterious Yuuhi Kurenai's past a little bit if you can, it can get pretty annoying if you keep doing it every chapter before you finally explain it.

Keep it up.

you'll find that it slacks off a bit... I myself only review once or twice to many of the stories I love to read.. possibly better to count your stories popularity by how many ppl favorite story it (I have!).

great story

Nice. I was saving my opinions and waiting on the second chapter since I had no idea what, if any, priority you had given to this particular story. That said, I like the direction the story has taken so far and find your characterization of Shino to be interesting and, within the confines of pre-time-skip canon, pretty accurate.

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Canis Black

*Whistles* That's a lot of reviews. You know what that means? It means you're a great author! Anyways, I really like this fic so far. Update soon!

cool chapter i just got abit lost or it could be that i just got up and i am reading this half asleep i dunno but it was still pretty good

It's so good .. so good. I love this fic. I think is due to your writing style. Nothing that could be categorised as 'entertaining' ( a big fight etc. ) happened, but your skills make this story very interesting and enjoyable ... update soon ...

Great fic. Will this be Naruto/Hinata? Update soon.

That was really cool. I like how you wrote it. I can't wait for the next one to come out! Your really did make Naruto more real! Update soon! :)

One of the most promising Naruto fics I've ever seen: good spelling, grammar, and a storyline with a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!