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THE SOTRY SO FAR IS NICE! IM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Oh, I just got to read a couple of chapters of this. ^^ Love it! The whole plot twist with Sara and her company is awesome. Fun mysteries. Anyhow, I can't wait to see how this progresses, so update soon (see? No threats!) So... you're making a humor fic website? Hm... I may have to send you my old script-format SO story. -does happy dance because it'll find a home-

I'm so happy you updated. I can't wait for more.

Pretty good. ^_^

Nice fic and as PGW say's the world needs more Fayt/Nel or any story thats not AlNel(not that I have anything against the pairing its just the ones I've read aren't very good) or AlFayt which is kinda the reason I wrote Not so Innocent. Update soon. Please.

Oh, mystery mystery...questions and more questions. Nope, I won't kill you cause it's late - only if you stop -insert evil Mwahahaha here- XD

No really, I love the mystery. Now your mission is to work on the next chapter so I can have some answers :D

Another pretty nice chapter. I don't really care that much if it is 'late'.

Pretty good, there needs to be more Fayt/Nel fics ^_^

I been to New York before, it was kinda a shock to me, so many tall buildings.

Great update!! I can't wait to read more. Have fun in NY!!

CURSES! My first review that I worked ever so ** was just deleted by my pinky hitting an unfortunate sequence of keys. Bah...
Anyhow, I loved it! And it's gonna be a C/M?? YAYS! -does a happy dance- Poor Nel, though... New York is a big, scary city. It could probably eat all Elicoor's cities then regurgitate them as smog. Though it would be funny to have someone try to pickpocket Nel. Can we say stabbity stab? Of course, then she'd probably be arrested, as the police don't take kindly to that sort of thing... XD Er.. right. That was a bit rambly, ne? But at any rate, I hope you update soon! -does big sad lonely puppy eyes, and when that doesn't work, CAT summons a frozen trout to menace the author with- Now I must have a new chapter or ye shall get a sound trout-thwacking! Bwahahahaha!

No flame on the pairings. Everyone has their favs and you got half of mine in here so I had to read :D Anyway, good start. I like the idea of Nel lost in the city. I want to see how she handles it, know what's with the power outages, and what happens next. Oh, and Nel's lost on Earth with her Elicoorian outfit on! Trouble. Write on and write for what you like - it's not worth writing if you don't have fun also.

It seems really good, so I can't wait to read the other chapters

This is great. I can't wait for another chapter.