Well written piece...Hm I could see it as a longer story...but this is just as good!!

Utterly wonderful. Fascnating story you've written, and it hink it's betterlike this, in the short form. prfect expression of elizabeth's feeling

What an interesting idea. Me likey. x

Ya know I've been wanting them to explore BENEATH the city for some time now. Sea creatures? Algae? Fish? Reefs? But anyway, yeah, wow a crazy Elizabeth. I would pay to see that. Ch-ch-changes.

Very haunting. The scene in Conversion where John begged Elizabeth to kill him was one of the saddest, and this mirrors it very well.

And, of course, the last paragraph says it all. :-)

Sweet story. I loved the angst and the last line was amazing, absolutely well done :)

oh please... another chapter... it is so good!

Lexa

Aw, I think that it would have been a great chapter story. But this is just as great. Loved it and how similar it was to Conversion.

Fascinating!! Truly fascinating...

As always, I love your work. Such insight and creativity. I'm truly jealous. :D Great job!

AL