wow that was great! :D

lol I have to go but i will finish reading it. its awsome so far

kagome and inuyasha for eternity!! great story

awe that was cute.


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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

awsome ending. You are very imageive.

it good. yes yes. good job.

Yeah...I LUV LEMONS!

omg!
this is so good!
please update soon!

Pretty good! The first chapter really hooks you, and this fourth chapter makes a nice, satisfying ending. Nice job!

cool

hey that was great they finally get some alone time again i like that alot,lol. anyways please update soon

This chapter is incredibly sweet. It sheds light onto the sensitive side of Inu-yasha that is rarely revealed. The idea for Inu to give Kagome strawberry wine is rather interesting. I suppose that he's trying to get her drunk so that he can seduce her. LOL. I also like how the grandpa and mom are conveniently lured off by a search for talismans. This fic really fits into the Inu-yasha series. The only line that I have qualms with is this one:
"He found the school and luckily, Kagome didn’t lose her lunch."
Cliches can kill the mood quickly.
Overall, I really like this chapter. You should write the next one.

Have them have sex on a bed of roses.

Okay, Now you know you can't leave me hanging! Great! But I wana see the "bed of blue roses" ooh, how very kinky!