Reviews for Harry Potter and the Joining of Destinies

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Draeconin 2008-08-27 ch 4,	abuseHm... Durran = Lucius, Mieran = Snape, Martin = a mix of Ron and Draco. I'm having a hard time believing Harry is as obtuse as you've made him, regardless of the fact that JKR did the same thing. I keep remembering, at Harry's Sorting, that the Hat considered both Slytherin and Ravenclaw as a possible placement for him (strongly Slytherin). Harry had to know how to read people and react accordingly, or he never would have survived the Dursleys or other situations. Harry's biggest failing, other than the conditioning he underwent at the Dursleys hands, was wanting too hard to please others (so they would like him). It was that, more than anything, that led to most of his troubles.
Draeconin 2008-08-27 ch 3,	abuseAlthough the story shows promise, it's a little sparse on detail. I feel as though I'm just skimming the top of the waves, rather than actually getting into the water. In my opinion, it needs more development.
Draeconin 2008-08-27 ch 2,	abuseNever heard of 'The Wheel of Time'. I'll have to look it up, since I have absolutely no idea what you may have borrowed from it, as opposed to what you have made up yourself. >Saidin and Saidar are broken up into five elements: air, earth, fire, spirit and water. Well, we now know Harry isn't in a Celtic area, anyway. Those are the New Age elements (the Greek elements, plus 'spirit'). The Celts had Sea, Sky, and Land (fire was considered a modifier, and a part of everything). You might want to proofread this chapter again: especially the first half. There are even words missing. (If you speed read, don't. You'll see what you expect, rather than what's there.)
Miseriamorti 2008-08-22 ch 16,	abuseI lover your story and it sucks that its abandoned but w/e. Has anyone adopted the sequel?
Willow26 2008-07-27 ch 2,	abuseo I like this story so far. Gota love the Wheel of Time (Roll on A memory of Light!) I will keep reading later!
10000 SGA Fans can't be wro... 2008-07-26 ch 16,	abuseThis was a very well-written story and I am bummed out that you are abandoning the sequel. If you can, please send the ideas for a sequel to me, and I might be able to finish it, with your consent. If not, please write the sequel when you have time. This fic is too good to be stopped here. If you need my email, it's on my homepage.
Kit 2008-06-17 ch 12, anon.	abuse"Harry, having recovered some of his strength, channeled fire once again to pull the heat and flame away from the soldiers and spread it into the air to dissipate harmlessly." This is a Saidar technique as explained in book four to Rand while he was comparing the different ways Saidin and Saidar act to accomplish the same thing. No big deal just letting you know in case you do another crossover with WoT in the future.
Kit 2008-06-17 ch 11, anon.	abuseThank you for writing this story it has been highly entertaining. However it seems to me that Harry is not particularly well trained as an Aes Sedai. His attacks are weak and only marginally effective. Blossoms of Fire, Arrows of Fire and Deathgates come to mind. He fights more like the White Tower Aes Sedai do. Good fic though. My belated condolences. I look forward to reading more of your work. PS. Good job with Boondock crossover I could not stop laughing at some parts.
BloodyRose622 2008-06-10 ch 6,	abuseI love this story! I just wanted to say that and picked a random chapter to review on! Great Job! i love it!
Kirk4ever 2008-05-27 ch 5,	abuseI was wondering if you could give me a really brief overview of the whole war thing - I've never heard of the war of power, but thought it looked like an interesting story. I got a bit lost with all the names and places and stuff and am never really any good with keeping up with battle sceens anyway...
917brat 2008-03-04 ch 16,	abusecould you tell me if anyone takes up this story i would really like to know.
chris 2008-02-16 ch 16, anon.	abuseI was sorry to hear you abandoned the Dragon story. I really enjoyed reading it. I no0ticed you mentioned chapters that were recovered. I would love for you to send them to me if you can. I would like to read them and see where it goes. thanks
The-Resident 2008-02-04 ch 15,	abuseIn one chapter you mentioned that Balefire removed the individual from the weave from beginning to end. The memory remained, but the actions were erased. That being so, wouldn't Archeron not killed the girl, Voldemort not been born/made and Harry and his parents never attacked. You've left a plot hole big enough to put the SST through. Hope you can answer my questions.
silanadh 2008-02-04 ch 16,	abuseI love your story and I am sorry you abandoned it. Good luck wite other stories. I also would like to ask for the chapters to the story.
Ero-kun 2008-02-04 ch 16,	abuseOmg! This story is amazing. I'm sad that you're not writing a sequel but I hope someone will adopt it or you will bring yourself to write it in future ^^ I also hope you'll leave note if someone adopt this/you'll continue ;>

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