WOW! I know it's been ages since you published this story, but I just found it and I HAD to review. I could not stop reading it! you KILLED Obi-Wan, that's bad, really, really bad(LOL) but the story is so amazing, it makes so much sense. I know that if it were cannon George Lucas would not have any story to tell, ha ha( and we would not see so much of Obi-Wan anyway, my fav character) but out of the many AU's that I've read this one was one of the best. It does make sense to me the idea of a female master training Anakin, especially one with a strong personality as Tahl has.You managed to merge the JA books with the movies in a very creative way. and Obi-Wan is so brave... I really appreciated that he finally got the chance to reunite with Qui-Gon. HAPPY ENDINGS YAY!! CONGRATULATIONS!

Omg, what a great story! Obi-Wan is so brave, I was bawling my eyes out when he died! I can't wait for more. Oh, btw, I also read 'Forsaken and Begotten', and I thought it was one of the best stories I'd ever read. Are you going to be writing a sequel? Galadryal.

Awesome, but when are you doing a sequel to Forsaken and Begotten?

Oh,Ari! You did kill him. I was sad for a moment, but I do see whree it was for the best here. And Tahl was integral to this little AU. Very nice twist with Tahl taking Ani to train.

And I loved our noble little Obi as he explained his choice to Qui in the speeder, then when he showed him the visions when they were both one with the Force.

Wonderful work as always my dear. Reminds me of how much I miss reading your stuff :)

Very enjoyable - so glad you added that last chapter.

--shan

yes! loved it. i love obi-wan, but it would have been cool if this is how the star wars universe actually worked. can't wait for your next story.

Actually I liked the way you ended this...Still hate you killed Kenobi, but I'll get over it! Well written story! Kudoos!

Wonderful job! Even though I knew that Obi-Wan would die...I still cried! Well written. And the epilogue was great! Definitely wrapped things up. I loved how he mentioned the two possibilites of the future...and showed why Obi-Wan did what he did. Sounded just like the boy.

Great job!

(dabs her eyes) I loved it... It's amazing what a simple choice can do to a future... I liked the whole Tahl thing as well... It was a definite twist :-)

You're right, it really does compliment the story and a nice way to round it off

Yes it was sad last chapter, but I still loved the story :) great work

GAH! i canNOT BELIEVE you KILLED my OBI! that's gotta be a first for you! but you still...he...doy, you KILLED him!! i'm going back to my Stargate fics now...at least there they can't kill my Jonas

GAH!!

yeah, i'll be waiting to hear from ya bout SD...in the meantime, i'll be rewriting the outline so that i can kill you in it...JUST KIDDING!

Please pass the tissue. That was brilliant!

AH! NO! How dare you kill Obi-wan! Gosh, this was soo sad! I loved how you made him out the hero, and your story was very well written but I just can't believe you would kill him! Gah! *sobs!*

OH this is so sad! That last line just about kills me! Well written! Luved this chapter!

Hey :-) Remember me? :-P ... Ashamed to say that I haven't been posting any reviews for you :-( But I finally simply had to... I hate it when Obi dies... But I'm glad that if this is the way he is going... Boy what a way to go... :-) Bawled through almost the entire chapter... I don't know if I could even start on the next one without tears just knowing about Obi...

That one line...

He felt Obi-Wan take in a breath and let go.

Kills me... I was keeping my tears in check until that point... Great story :-D Love it...

OH MY GOD YOU DIDN'T?! NOW WONDER YOU RAN AWAY IN YOUR REPLY! YOU KILLED HIM! OBI WAN! LITTLE OBI-WAN! :O so sad, and aww :(