I really like it so far. Update again soon please?

Hey You have to update this fic. Its kinda driving me insane, so I would really like it if you updated and saved my sanity. Ja ne!

I love update soon.

This is a very interesting story so far, and I'm enjoying it very much :) I love ghost stories! I'll be looking forward to seeing what else you have planned for this fic! Especially since it's been revealed that Kenshin can become visible when he wants to :)

Oh woah...what an intense and enjoyable chapter! That was a sweet exchange between Kaoru and Kenshin in the beginning, and I love the way you introduced Megumi, Sano and Yahiko...Megumi saw Kenshin...and now these guys can? I agree with Kaoru, what's going on? Can't wait to find out!

Oh wow. Doesn't flow very well? You have got to be kidding! This is so wonderfully written, especially the fight scenes, and Kaoru's personality, which most people have trouble with. And what a fantastic and original idea! I loved everything, the way you introduced Kenshin, Kaoru thinking he was a girl, and the build up in finding out what Kenshin really was.

But oh no, poison...I hope Kaoru will be OK...Hopefully Kenshin will find a way to help her.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

lalalalala *everyone bows*

*Princess Lily enters*

L: what a wonderful and a wonderful story u, *points to servant* go photocopy it and make sure everyone in our kingdom gets one and while ur at it, remind them to pay the montly fee for princess lily's new tv set well off u go

Person: yes ur majesity *bows and leaves*

L: sigh its so late i feel like taking a bubble bath sighh i think i will hav the bath in the Northeast tower bathroom #25 yes yes that one.

Person: yes i will go prepare it for you

L: sigh well ur at it go put kenshin on, i want to watch it

person: yes princess lily

L: *watch kenshn while takin bath*

-end of section continue next time )

neways hehe such a good story lalala u HAVE to keep riting is soo cool and dont forget... AOSHI has to show up soon and misao and sojiro hehe well cyaa

*music and sparkles fades as princess lily ends her speech, everyone stands up and claps*

You write very well, balancing good descriptions with well thought out dialog. I am particularly pleased with this story because Kenshin is a rurouni. It seems more and more RuroKen stories are about a very dominant, arrogant Battousai and far fewer are about the Rurouni, a character that I love. The details are of course different but your sense of the characters seems quite good and in keeping with the manga. I really look forward to more!

So Kenshin can make himself visible to people when he wants to...interesting. But he doesn't like doing so...even more interesting.

I like how you describe things, eg '...his red hair dancing behind him as he dashed...'. It makes it so easy to picture it in your head.

Rurouni-chan. Haha. Love it.

! AHH! love it D keep writing ahh sanosuke (ps. i hope aoshi comes out soon ._. ) well awesome storyline *suspense

Wait for so long? XD If you call the span of time between your updates 'long' mine would make 'forever' XD! Anyways..

San-chan! *glompies*

It's so good! I love every scene! Specially the one with Kenshin and Kaoru alone! Everyone in your fic is so in character that it's absolutely amazing! Haha, don't worry, writing's like that. XD You plan one thing, it ends to another lol. Hey, it's still awesome!

nice and kind of similar to the tv series. Are you going to make it like that? Hopefull Continue please! I like it very much so far.

Scary, please update soon, Your story is great!

kenshin...a spirit...interesting...

please update soon...i would like to read some more of it...

ciao..

it's cool. countinue asap. what is kenshin? :D