 AmaryMei 2009-10-10 . chapter 3I know it's kind of late, but am looking forward to what happens on Ran's birthday - and how you plan to have the BO butt in. ^_^ |
 Sunago 2008-08-06 . chapter 3I can't wait to see what the present is! And I'm feeling really apprehensive like somethings gonna happen and ruin everything. Can't wait to read what happens next! |
 KudoRan 2008-08-02 . chapter 3Very Nice! =D Please update soon if you can! ^_^ I really want to know what Shinichi got Ran for her birthday! xD |
 ESHonoredPride 2007-08-01 . chapter 3*whispers* Seven days... Oh that got me xD I was laughing so hard, convinced the syndicate was on the phone and kind of taunting him by warning when they'd come. I was like, "Oh crap! Run Conan, suspence!" and forming all these thoughts until I finally climbed back into the chair(the shock of these thoughts sent me tumbling out. Thanks ;.; Lol) then I was-"Oh. Nevermind." ^^;;
Nice story! Hurry with chappie! *fixes death-glare on author, preparing to glompelhug instant update is posted* |
 ran 2006-05-30 . chapter 3 omg! finish this ficc please! it is soo very good..! cant wait 2 see wut happens... :D
anywayz, i love it so far... good luck! |
 Yumi Sakura 2006-01-28 . chapter 3whaa! T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T pLEASE UPDATE!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! *cough cough* ok.. its a really really really great story another one for my favorites and this will also be on my story alert list! SoulSeeker you rock! |
 Trumpet-Geek 2006-01-17 . chapter 3Nice so far! Can't wait to read the next one! Update soon please! |
 Kit-Chan <3 2006-01-17 . chapter 1 *review review* lol |
 gonna.keep.reading 2006-01-15 . chapter 2 u gotta update
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 Trumpet-Geek 2006-01-10 . chapter 2Getting more interesting! |
 RanXShinichi 2006-01-09 . chapter 2that was really good!
:o i think Conan/Shinichi got Ran.. a ring :O
i could be wrong lol~~ anyway great story |
 RyanGosling4Ever 2006-01-09 . chapter 2I really liked this chapter! ^_^;; So, what's he "finally gonna tell" Ran..? *suspense music playing in the background*
Hm..and good job with how you brought Conan/Shinichi's parents into this story! Very original idea to solving the whole If-one-is-there-the-other-can't-be-there problem when dealing with Conan and Shinichi, hehe ^_^ I didn't even think about having Shinichi's mom dress up once again as "Mrs. Edogawa" and sign Conan out for a couple of days, lol!
I really can't wait to see how he's going to appear at the party, or what he got Ran! And what's he gonna tell her?? Ack! Way to leave it at a cliffhanger! Although...this party had better be small, only with people attending who aren't gonna go out and fangirlishly blab about Shinichi's return, lol! It'll be pretty bad if the Black Syndicate found out that "Oh my gosh! Did you hear?? Kudo Shinichi came back, FINALLY, from whereever he's been...He attended Mouri Ran's party!" Then, not only would Shinichi be hunted again, and the point behind hiding behind the identity of Edogawa Conan totally obliterated, but Ran and everybody else would be in grave danger as well. So, I don't think the party should be TOO big, lolol XD Maybe just those that either know of Conan/Shinichi's identity (Agasa, Heiji, Haibara) or those who don't really care (The Detective Boys)? I know that Ran had a stack of invitations to give out to people, from Chapter 1, but I think it'd be extremely risky for everyone of those people to be there... Maybe you can have something come up at the last minute for all those people, (except the ones listed above), and they can't make it, or something? Lol, and then Ran would be sad, and Shinichi would show up and comfort her XD ^_^;; Ahh, just my romantism running away from me again, lol! XD
Please note, that what I wrote above are all just but suggestions, lol. You're the author, so you should continue it however you want. I think the plot of the story, as well as the fluidity, is coming along nicely! Can't wait for your update to/for Chapter 3!!
-Kitty |
 Mahoro chan 2006-01-08 . chapter 2YAY I love this story *hugs SoulSeeker* XD Please upload the next chapter soon ^_^ I can't wait to read it! Im still contemplating on what Shinichi got for Ran. I bet it's something great ^^ |
 MaekoChan 2006-01-08 . chapter 2Ahh.. darn the suspense of not knowing. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work. This is very well written. |
 RyanGosling4Ever 2006-01-04 . chapter 1That was so good! Wow, I'm really impressed with your writing style! Definitely one of the best DC fics on here, lol ^_^;; It's amazing how in-character and believable you make the charries, and I loved the ConanxRanxShinichi fluffy interactions! :)
One thing, though, that kinda threw me off a bit when I read it the first time through, was at the second major part, when Shinichi woke up in the morning. I had to re-read that part a couple of times to finally realize that it was still talking about Conan, and not really Shinichi there. In fact, it wasn't until I read that Shinichi 'grabbed his glasses' that I realized that it WAS still talking about Conan, and that he was waking up the next morning. But the way it was written, kinda made it seem like Conan had already reverted back into Shinichi, and was staggering out of bed in his own house... I don't know, it just seemed really out-of-the-blues, kinda, that you wrote that SHINICHI was the one who woke up to the sun in his face and staggered out of bed, when the rest of the story/chapter, Conan, the child form, is obviously the one that's there, not Shinichi. It was just kinda confusing. The way it is, it really does sound like Shinichi is the one doing the waking up and staggering around, and it really isn't until the reader reads the part about him putting on his glasses that we realize that we're still talking about Conan, the child form, and not REALLY Shinichi, the teenager. At least to me, lol XD It might be better if you'd just put 'Conan' instead of 'Shinichi' there in that first paragraph. It might be less confusing. Just a suggestion :)
But other than that tiny little bugger, this really is an amazingly well written story, so far! I really hope you update this soon!! Can't wait to see what Chapter 2's like! ^_^;;
Oh, as a last note, always remember, and never forget! ShinichixRanxConan, forever and always! ^_^;; |
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