i love your fanfic so much!! i hope you'll add more chapters soon. i'll be looking forward to that. i really love it so much. :) keep up the good work! :D

i absolutely love it...at first i must admit i was like the chronicle of malfoy? But as I continued to read...I FELL in love with Draco..I mean the story...lol...GOOD job...i cant wait to read chapter 11

i like it.
it is very very good :)

Nice start :D Let's see what will happen between our two favourite love birds ^^

What happened? WHY is this utterly indulgent nonsense discontinued? I love it, write more please! Your Malfoy is hilariously insane.

Haha, wow! Ron's actually INTELLIGENT, deep down! That's awesome. And I love that Draco couldn't stand the sight of her in someone else's arms. Aww.

Okay, you REALLY need to update. I will DIE if you don't.

The door opens again, and time stands still. I look at her, and our eyes communicate, and she leaps to my arms and kisses me passionately and–

My heart jumped reading that. I was like NO WAY! And then 'Ha! As if.' Well done. Made my insides wilt and cry a few sad tears...

But poor Draco! His parents! No wonder he's an asshole! Aww :( I feel sorry for the boy.

Update soon, please. And yes, this is no longer a reminder, but a request :)

Pansy is an evil little witch. Her attempt to spoon feed Draco made me literally wince with horror. Gosh. Now, wasn't I right about that flight of stairs?

I love Draco at the very end of this chapter, what with coming back to pay the bill and confusing Hermione :)

Fantastic chapter. You've increased my distaste for Pansy tenfold. Now, again... update soon, please :)

Mugshots is a way better name for a cat than 'Crookshanks'. I've got to hand it to Draco here. He kind of kicks Hermione's ass in the naming department.

Pansy irritates me, in an amusing sort of way. But still, I wish someone would yell at her, and/or throw her down a flight of stairs.

"You're giving me the evil eye," he states. "Why?"

Lol! Harry is very shrewd and amusing in this story. I like him, surprisingly enough. I'm not usually a massive fan of ff Harry because he's always a bit of a ponce, but in this story, he's actually got rational side and he seems to be the most logical of the group.

I also loved the 'desecrater!' because that's exactly the same as I am with my coffee, and I can imagine Draco being all protective over his little cup of coffee and glaring the bejeezus out of Harry.

Loved this chapter :) And, just to remind you: update soon, please!

Hahaha... Okay, so after my last review I couldn't be bothered to pause after every chapter - just had to keep reading - and so was tempted to leave one final review. However! Each chapter in this is awesome enough to warrants its very own review, so here it is:

Ron's shirt made me laugh for so long, because its so Ron-like and weird and I can imagine how LOVELY that would have looked with his hair.

'Don't be a git, you git.' That also made me laugh for a while. A long while. My stomach hurt after reading this chapter :)

Haha, I love how you relate the writing tips from his 'muse' at the start of the chapter to stuff within the chapter:
'Justwhatam I doing with the likes of them anyway! Me, the epitome of virtue and good looks! Me, the vessel of supreme intelligence and extreme humility! Me, the personification of beauty and truth!

Cavorting, that's what.

Which is an abomination.'

Lol! That first line especially was amusing, because of how silly and arrogant Draco is, at the same time as being really very attractive ;)

Haha, I was wondering if Crookshanks was going to put in an appearance. I'm thoroughly glad he (he?) did.

Draco casually opening the window made me chuckle :)

Great chapter

Haha, Draco and Harry's conversation about watches blew me away.

“Get off me! I don’t want to see any piece of you!”

“But I was just showing you my—”

“I’m not interested in your Muggle ways!” I all but shriek.

That whole chunk of dialogue had me cackling scarily for a good five minutes. I love the interactions between Draco and Harry that are vaguely civil, with Draco's craziness thrown into the mix.

Draco being awesome at Runes, too, made me laugh. Him one-upping Hermione shouldn't be as satisfying as it is, but...

I really enjoyed this. Well done :)

This chapter made me laugh. Out loud. My roommates are now disturbed.

I really loved Draco's consistent inner commentary. He's just crazy enough to be awesome =]

Even after two chapters, your story has taken on a life of its own and is rolling along fantastically. Already, you've managed to intrigue EVERYONE, judging by the reviews of yours I've read, and establish a really solid connection with all of the characters.

Also, it's nice to see you portraying Harry as a decent, relatively intelligent person, as opposed to the rather boring, often scummy git that's so commonly featured in Draco/Hermione stories. The image of him boredly checking his watch and answering, "Twice" when Draco asked if he'd mentioned he's a freak... well, it stuck in my head and amused me to no end :) So, thanks.

On a side note, I really like the length of your characters.

This story is shaping up to be something special. Mostly because of Draco, I think, along with the minor characters who all have personalities of their own, thank goodness, rather than just being used as background noise.

'Because I’m Draco Malfoy.' Says it all, really.

This is fantastic =]

I was put onto this by Tierfal's site, and thought I would give it a go since she has awesome taste. I must say, I'm not surprised - in a really, really good way.

This chapter really drew me in, gave the story a setting and a snarky, wittily juvenile narrator. I think you're pulling off first person AND present tense spectacularly, which very few authors can do. I love Hermione in this chapter - so primly Hermione-like, being all, 'I can't have this horror living a whole floor down from me!'

You've done a really great job with establishing the characters and the story in the first chapter, and I look forward to reading more.