Yet another good story, too bad it ends here (for now, anyway :P).. great job, anyway! Hope you update New Beginnings soon =).

Well written, entertaining OCs and a fun plot. Definitely read this if you have not.

A well written entertaining read.

I thought it was great. With the way Lee act towards kasy and kasy toward her while flirting or being a smart ** reminded me a little of Kim and Shego. And I think Ann Tagonist would make your storys even more interesting if you kept her. (but then again they already are plenty interesting ^_^)

wow

kool

but I doubt you are coming back to reinvigorate these characters


and leonardo da vinchi would be mighty ** at their names

Jaron out

A very interesting look into the future of the Possible family! I never imagined Shego would be the gym coach, thats one class I would go out of my way to avoid for fear of extreme pain or injury XD. I'm also interested in the characters Devon and Lee(Leigh?), since they kinda came out of nowhere on this, one thing too, where can I get my own iceberg/boat? Anywho I like the attitudes you've given to Sheki and Kasy Ann, its a good mix of there mothers along with a few little quirks of their own, nice job!

Now on to one thing that keeps recurring in your stories that I definately DO NOT LIKE(Gasp! Hard to believe ain't it?) And that is the fact that it seems the Possible clan is now working directly for Global Justice *shudder*. I have had serious problems with global security forces ever since S.H.I.E.L.D ousted Nick Fury from there director postion in the Marvel universe. Another thing I don't like is the fact that organizations like Global Justice are always keeping secrets, lik the fact that Middleton is in fact a training ground for potential GJ agents, and they aren't told this until they turn 21. Now personally I hate having secrets kept from me with a frickin passion, I absolutely HATE being left out of the loop. I would respond with extreme anger if something like that happened to me. Even if it was for my own good, I would want to be told ASAP, if the organization kept secrets from me I could I ever hope to trust them?

I much prefer the idea of Team Possible of being an independent group and not rely on organizations like Global Justice (spits at the name) to tell them when and where to go, it would be okay if they were allies every now and then though. No offense to you or the stories, thats just my point of view.

Note: This review is covering the whole story, not just this chapter.

This was quite an interesting story. Other than a few minor spelling and grammatical errors, it was done perfectly. The kidnapped to participate in a life or death challenge is a bit of a cliche, but not nearly as cheesy as most of them are done. I thought the ending was quite interesting though and it was quite enjoyable to read.

when you described Kasy in the first chapter, the clothes choise striked me as odd i heve always imagened her as more of a punk look. Not saying that she dont get girls or anything but a bit more tomboyish. Great story

Just read TP2.0. Very weird, but definitely fun! Can't wait for their future stories.

Also, Petey Pablo, I know is a musician. So, who are Deven and Lee(Leigh)?

Now, now... It's been a while since the last time I've read some of your work (Not counting "Life's a Drag", of course).

Maybe it was all the fanarts your characters gained, maybe I was smart or maybe it was kinda easy, but overall... Kasy and Sheki turned out to be quite as I expected. Maybe it's just that I like the characters too much.

Deven and Lee were quite interesting antagonists. I can't help but to wonder whenever you yourself, the author, have her real reasons for doing this trial on your mind, or just simply forgot about that and decided to leave their intentions in the shadows from the beggining, as it would hardly need any explaining, at least for now.

I wanted to tell you, I've been thinking for a while about writting a Fanfic from your series, with Kasy and Sheki as the main characters, and I think I'm finally going to carry it out. I can tell you more about it if you want, via PM in the Slash Haven or something like that (I'm Alexlayer there, but I think you already know that). I'd really like to know if I have your blessing.

Well, it was a nice fic overall. I just wondered... isn't there a lot of your stuff that you're not uploading in your acount? Besides "Life's a Drag", that's it. I'm not sure.

Oh, well, see ya around, buddy! And keep up your great work! -_^

interesting characters, lee and deven. hmm...really interesting hope to read more!

I really enjoyed this chapter. :D
Devon and Lee are pretty cool villains, and Kasy and Sheki play well off of each other. I liked the chess idea, and... and... I can't come up with anything else... It was too awesome, lol.
It's all blurred together into a chuck of solid greatness. XD

In all seriousness, really great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely.

Congratulations!

I liked the HP reference, by the way, did they clean the house (the villains)?

see you next time

Total awesomeness. Gotta love Kasy and Sheki.
Kudos to you ^^

WOOT!