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Reviews For: That Which Lingers

obliviously hopeful
2007-03-22
ch 1,
abuseExcellent writing skills, the way your words flow.
Im not a Edmund/Peter shipper but because of your writing I did have to remind myself lol.
LadyLapisLazuli
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseOh, that's sweet!
Id Pendemus
2006-10-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is just beautiful. :-)

You wrote it so well. Every description was wonderful, everything was so emotional. I loved it dearly. I'm adding it to my favorites for sure. :-)
ScrimSchaw
2006-09-26
ch 1,
abuseI love this fic. Your writing is incredibly sensitive, and deals with touchy subject matter smoothly and without it seeming *wrong* at all. A wonderful piece of literature, and I'm glad I read it.
dokichan
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abusePlease continue?
jammybrit
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuse"Edmund delivers his own brand of justice, colder and more practical than Peter sometimes likes to think about.

He is, in some ways, Peter's bloodied sword."
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What a fantastic description. I always imagined from the way it was described in the books that Edmund had that kind of role, but I never knew the words to put it into before now. Thankies!
I thought that the alcoholism thing was really good. I thought it was perfect, and a brilliant story about the things C.S.Lewis glossed over. Not that he wrote it wrong, of course.
The very last line was brilliant. It summed up the whole fic in eight perfect words.
Lauren x
viennacantabile
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseexcellent, excellent pov here. written really well, don't know how i missed this. -.-
Katherine4
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was STUNNING.

I love the hurt and the pain and the hope at the end. Ohmigod, my heart aches for Ed. *hearts you dearly*
Ridke
2006-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI do hope you write a sequel or a next chapter. However annoying people who say ask you to sound. So I ask and bow down to your greatness! ^_^ Please write more, your words flow so beautifully. It was such a wonderful read! XD
Rebecca
2006-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh poor alcoholic Edmund! I love him so. VERY well written, although perhaps slightly OC (Edmund the Just, and all that). If this is pre-slash, will there be slash?
BeautifulNightmare
2006-01-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful!You must write more or I shall kidnap your [insert prized possesion/person here]!
Bwee.
2006-01-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful! I do hope you write more of this pairing, as much as it goes against what the author would want. >< It's a guilty pleasure.
SugarHighNutcase
2006-01-02
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. That was just awesome. Great work!
Capegio
2006-01-02
ch 1,
abuseOh, brilliant. Your words flow so easily, and you have an extremely well thought-out and coherent story. Everything you say leads to other things that you mention later and there are no loose ends.
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