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soraskybeauty 7/15/10 . chapter 6
good story i never thought of these two as a pairing now im trying to find all the hints,

ther is one scene in the japenese version where there playing basketball if you can call that a hint. but great story, very funny and the emotions were portrayed great
Taeniaea 11/26/08 . chapter 6
Great Story
Life Remixed 7/18/07 . chapter 6
*gawks*

*widens eyes*

*replaces lower jaw*

that fic rocked

seriously ! that was cool
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 6
Aw *goes all gooey inside* the ending was really sweet

Aw...*giggles* go them...Theres not enough Ray Hillary out there loved it

And Kai? hes all good rite? all better and back to himself?

x

Turkey
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 5
Ah so thts why shes all glowy in the eyes and stuff... hm still wat the hell is tht thing? is is cos of the fire? hm interesting

well atleast they are all ok now i was worried

*glomps Kai tightly*

x

Turkey
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 4
M fish and chips *tummy grumbles* *pouts*

If only Tyson hadnt eaten them all *glares*

Aw poor Hills couldnt imagien what she must be going through all tht guilt and everything and knowing that she couldnt do a thing to stop tht thing inside of her *glomps hill*
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 3
OML *cries* poor Kai poor Ray poor Hilary

Oh no That was so sad...*sniffles* *glomps unconcious Kai*

And poor Maxie tearing out three stitches *glomps Maxie*

*runs over to the next chappie* I have to fiind out what happens

x

Turkey
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 2
OML...Wat the hell? gah RUN RAY RUN!

Oml what is Hilary? no correction what is tht thing? GET OUT OF HILARY YOU EVIL THING YOU

Do you think i made a good argument against it? i do Lol

On to the next one
phoenix-shalimar 4/18/07 . chapter 1
*literally rolls on floor laughing*

omg the great high and mighty Kai got beat with a woopie cusion? hahahahahaha oml the classic got Kai *sniggers* oh hell i had to stop and jst roll onthe floor for 15 minutes much to my mums horror we had a visitor and there is her 18 year old daughter rollign on the floor with laughter Lol levay tht was funni...

right good chappie off to the next one

oh and poor Kai *glomps* he got his head smacked on the rock wall

rite next chappie *grins*

x

Turkey
aneezaali3 7/29/06 . chapter 6
great story! keep it up!

AnEeZa
X3 7/8/06 . chapter 6
...wth?...O_o
spookpook1 6/21/06 . chapter 6
That was so good! One of the best fanfics that I have read!
CTraffic 4/30/06 . chapter 6
omg! Don't end there! you evil! lol! Please update son!
Chibi Fye 4/30/06 . chapter 6
Hello! only one thing...update as soon as you can please! nOn
hikari0205 1/22/06 . chapter 1
Aw! That ending is so cute!

That was brilliant, so much detail in it and I love how you kept the characters as their usual personalities. Alot of people have problems keeping them in character but you did it so well! I love all of your fics so much ! _
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