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Reviews For: Never Gonna Leave You

Thunder-Kun
2008-04-16
ch 2,
abuseSad and sweet seem to go hand in hand, don't they?
SarcasmIsMe
2006-06-28
ch 2,
abusethat was beautiful.
Caster
2006-01-05
ch 2,
abuseAh, finally I can review this! I was SO excited to see that you wrote this –I kind of stared at the computer screen for a moment, filled with utter joy- then squeed and clicked!!

The way you portray David’s emotions is excellent. He’s crying, hiding in the men’s restroom, just trying to get it together. We can imagine and even identify with that, so you’ve done a wonderful job. Greg helping him out is just a bonus, but I love seeing that David has a real friend that won’t let him down. Even the kiss on the forehead tells us something (that Greg really cares, which makes me happy! :D)

Oh, and you’re writing in second person! That POV scares me, but you do it amazingly well.

The second chapter… I’m speechless. It’s just so emotional. We’ve never seen David break down like that, but Nick seems to understand. (And Greg, as he stands sentinel at the door, daring anyone to try and enter! :D) My absolute favorite part is where they fall asleep together (can I use that too? Gosh, now I’ve an image in my head that I’ve fallen in love with. As a matter of fact, I think it’s an image loved by numerous fans like ourselves! I know my_wheezy used it and what a fic she wrote! ^_^)

Definitely goes on my Favorite Fic list! It’s just… wow. Such an impact. Thank you SO much for writing it!
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