Aww, that was too perfect! Wow, you set that up nicely!

good i liked it.

Oh my... I really like this story. Especially since it's Thief king and not Bakura. Sure, Bakura and Malik is cool too, but this is just... different. Sadly enough there are soo less of Thief King/Malik fics. *sighs*

Anyway, don't worry about using 'too much details'! You are doing it perfectly fine! Go one this way, I like it.

And one last thing, please go on with writing about Thief king and Malik. Then there are at least a bit more then the ones besides those from Sierra's Darkness (not that I complain about that, but I already have read those )

Go on with this!

Oh, you flatter me. XD *glomptackles*

I am absoutely FLOORED by how well-written this is - it's probably only the third or fourth Citron fic I've read that isn't mine, too, and I really enjoyed the interaction between them. It flowed nice and smoothly; I'm loving the lines Bakura has. XD

Their banter is amusing, especially when Malik's thinking, 'way to ruin a moment', because that's just SO like Thief King.