very sad T_T

Good.

good story.. the emotions r very well written!

That was sweet, but can you do me a favor? Rewrite it and give it some paragraphs. It's hard to read in one big paragraph. This is not a flame, I love what you wrote, mostly cause I love Tamahome. So please, kinda separate it and send it to me? Please? From one Fy fan to another?