 ikiki123456 10/9/10 . chapter 6what happened to kicker |
 Storm Blue Lightning Saix 9/6/07 . chapter 16Very good although I thought it was a little confusing in some parts. |
 sweets2 7/14/06 . chapter 16 I think it was a bit too easy for the kids to go back home. I'd love to see the bots deal with homesick kids and other issues. I loved the allergy chapter as well. Great job keep up the good work. |
 Fk306 animelover 7/14/06 . chapter 16this is great please update soon |
 Spirit Prime 7/3/06 . chapter 16 Like it. |
 Spirit Dream Writer 7/3/06 . chapter 16Write more, write more Darnit! Eh, I should listen to myself and write more of my own story. Excellent chapter and awesome story! Can't wait for the next update. |
 The Lucille Incident 7/2/06 . chapter 15Execellent chapter Majestic. Can't wait to see the next one. |
 Spirit Dream Writer 7/2/06 . chapter 15Hehehehe! Thank you. It feels good to giggle again. I'm really sorry about what happened.
Please upload if you can I want to read more. |
 MegamiMao 6/17/06 . chapter 1RE: Well I'll review again when I've read... the ... other... 13... chapters /groan/. Not that I'm not looking forward to it! The Autobots are weird in Cybertron coz it's like they don't even remember anything that happened in Energon or Armada, Optimus doesn't even remember powerlinking! I don't know about the two men you're talking about in this coz Amrada got taken off the TV channel it was on before it finished... lousy ITV... I just remember Alexis, Carlos and Rad. Oh well, update soon! |
 Spirit Dream Writer 6/16/06 . chapter 14Wow! The whole 'what if this never happened' alternate demension thing...yikes!(shudders)
Great story so far though. I can't wait to see more of it. |
 JJ 6/16/06 . chapter 11 what ever happenet to sparkplug, and the other mini-cons thet were on earth during the armada battles? |
 Tigerprime 6/12/06 . chapter 13I don't like the sounds of Primacron being the master of this world and tf's are on
He was responsible of building Unicron's body in G1
He's evil I tell you, EVIL! |
 SidemolienBurn 6/12/06 . chapter 13 Uh... I just have one thing to say MJ- Who the slag is Empress?
-Sid |
 Hex Power 6/11/06 . chapter 13Ah...I thought that this was about the kids and about the Autobots' past. It just got weird, it good, but weird. |
 sweets2 6/10/06 . chapter 12 Just read the whole thing. I think it's a great story so far. I wonder what will happen next. The kids can't go back if the autobots don't go back can they? Not to mention there aren't many humans on the planet which could prove very interesting if the kids got hurt or sick...update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. |