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MySpaceBarIsBroken
2007-01-23
ch 2,
abuseoh wow! I love the angle you've taken! It's really a great story. I'm hoping I will sometime get to see the ending. Maybe one day you'll find a muse to finish?
d2shny
2006-05-10
ch 2,
abuseI like the story line looking forward to chap 3
Lady Sanzennine
2006-02-22
ch 2,
abuseAh, you're writing again! This is so exciting! I checked your profile on a whim to see if there were any new stories up, and what do I find but more delicious reading. Story's looking good so far. I like the title. I really liked that exchange about mirrors and what you see. I am SO curious to see where this goes. And, hey, did you say super dark? This can't possibly get any better for me. Looking forward to the next update!
Midnight Lady
2006-01-30
ch 2,
abuseah, dark and terrible angst. how we love and loathe thee.
Dream-Toxin
2006-01-14
ch 2,
abuseI am so hooked on this and its only the 2chp! Please continue I want to know what all happens! At first I was thinking the youkai/writer dude was some way related to our fav. inu family w/ the love of dogs,white hair, and the ball cap covering his head(dog ears?) but if he was he would already have all this information right?
aylaa
2006-01-07
ch 2,
abuseI really like the premise to the story, hopefully Rin really isn't the only one still alive. Of course, I'm sure you'll reveal that to us as time goes on right, right ? ;)
An Endless Woven Infinity
2006-01-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseI really like this story so far, as I like all of your stories really.
I love Sesshoumaru/Rin pairings, and I'm glad you write them.
Thank you.
HoshiiNoTenshi
2006-01-04
ch 2,
abuseI love the story. The Pearl was such a great story. Update soon.
SilverontheRose
2006-01-03
ch 2,
abuseI like the dark road you are going down. I am anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
Sirithgliniel
2006-01-03
ch 2,
abuseWonderful. It sounds as good and the pearl. You have a way with words unparalelled. I can't waight to find out how this one turns out. I sence a foreshadow af tragity or the like though. I hope I'm wrong, but if I
m write it would be a wonderful way to take the story. You author are a treasure to the world
Aurora
2006-01-02
ch 2, anon.
abuseSo here I am reading this new story I found, and I keep thinking that "this is getting interesting" as well as "hm, this writing style seems familiar." Well surprise for me, you are also the author of "The Pearl" a story I really really liked...such an original idea.

So after reading the first two chapters I have to admit I am very excited about this. Adding in the fact that I know you are a familiar author who will be sure not to dissapoint me with this storyline and I am doubly excited. I absolutly adore the grittiness of the characters so far. Can't wait to see more! :)
Rayne17703
2006-01-02
ch 2,
abuseanother story from asiancherries that has me entranced to keep reading lol i've read almost all of your stories so far and i'm about to start on "The Pearl" well keep up the good work and update soon ! ^_^
DPM
2006-01-02
ch 2, anon.
abuseYahoo! You're back ! About time too. (I adore the Pearl and the other writings you have done)

This story sounds a little bit frightening ...ie it's the not so-happy-ending.

Sess' s apparent callousness and imperviousness to little Rin. Surely that can't be true, can it?...**gasp in horror here**

But I can't stand in the way of your creativity.

Already I am intrigued by your plot. Looking forward to the twists and turns this story will take and I know you don't disappoint.
shaid
2006-01-02
ch 2,
abuseDark, huh? I think I can tolerate a little darkness, especially if you're writing it. I'm looking forward to your next update.
vimpire-dogdemongirl89
2006-01-02
ch 2,
abuseI like this keep updating, I want to read more!
~Vimpire~
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