I must say, I really do like your writing style and the stories I've read so far. I also find it interesting how you worked out the original purpose of the Reds, It had always been a pet theory of mine, but I don't remember RJ saying anything much about it in anything I've read over the years, and it is just so much fun to hate most Reds, even while understanding the need that brought them into being in the first place, ya know? the idea of a Red who knows this, and is not only willing, but eager to walk away from something to which she has dedicated her life, when it is no longer needed is a welcome one, and bodes well for the post Tarmon Gai'don world, which while I do not believe there will be any more official stories after AMOL, will still go on in the minds and imaginations of we who love RJs future/past/maybe world.

Anyway enough of the "Dick Handy" deep thoughts, eh? This was another very good story, from someone who shows a true talent, and I look foreward to reading ALL your other work soon, do you have a website with any of your own original work? I would be very interested in looking at that...,

Thank you and keep on keepin' on, eh?

A very enjoyable tale.

Keep writing.

This is really well written story :). Thanks for the read. And I hope you continue :).

This has been really good. I don't really see where this would go after this though. I suppose it could have her not only helping with the recruiting but also helping with (like Garnet) women who are interested in joining the Dragon but can channel (I'm thinking that she would test them, kinda just cutting the White Tower out of the loop) and they would stay for proper battle training and have the ones who want to heal and such go on to the White Tower, maybe as spies or something while making a Female core in the Asha'men that are battle trained and loyal to the Dragon, not the White Tower.

Excellent. Belivable story about an event that I wold have liked Jordan to cover in more detail. Gheral's accent was good, he sounded like Bayle Domon in my head. Straining hard to find anything to actually critisize, the only thing I could think of was Beyaelle's use of the word 'bro' to refer to her brother. It didn't quite fit in. Otherwise, the characters, actions, and politics seemed to be straight out of WOT.

Awww! That was cute. I don't know whether you meant it to be but it was.

Okaaay. So, why does god love me so. I login here, and suddenly there's like 3 looong fics, loong excellent fics. Wow (well, I haven't read the others yet, but).

Keep writing. Can you keep writing on this? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?

This is a very well written story, and the ending is very well written, with a lot of thought and emotion. Beautiful.

wow i love it! i dont usually read fanfics that dont have the main characters in it but this one i read and loved. write more ure great!

Very good! I liked your two main characters (nice work on Gheral's Illian dialect, incidentally), and the story dealt with some good stuff from the series, such as the results of Rand and Nynaeve's cleansing of saidin. Is that the end - I can see some stuff happening with Beyaelle and Gheral...

This was a great story, very little mistakes.great story line keeps you begging for more.This whole fan fic makes up for Path of daggers and winters heart.Please continue!

Thank you. I liked this one very much. It's so hard to find any fics about WoT. This was really pleasant to read. I liked the setting you have here and the characters also. But I'd still like to see some sort of a continuation, if possible. In any case I'd like to see you writing more WoT fics, all written WoT is always a positive surprise, but if they are good ones like yours, then it's even better. Thank you.

Great story. Beyelle is an interesting and believable character. Interested in submitting it here: http:/www.dragonlibrary.com ?

I really REALLY enjoyed this. You have managed to create one of the more beleivabley pleasant AS I have read about.

That was an amazing story...very moving. So when do we get another one? _