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Jarolee 1/4/09 . chapter 5
This is a great story!

I really like the plot!

please update!
Tori R 5/29/08 . chapter 5
That was a really good chapter. when is the next one coming out? Please send a email back to me.
LiL-Princess-Of-Death 7/6/07 . chapter 5
Cant wait till u update!
klara-kind 6/4/06 . chapter 5
WHEE! It was really good! Please keep writting!
Lovelinelivelong639 6/1/06 . chapter 5
hey

it took a long time to update but i like

it up date soon

love it

love

el
izumi minamoto 6/1/06 . chapter 5
ne, ne, quite interesting fic you've got XD. ano... you mentioned something in the fanfic that kinda confused me... it said:

'I remembered that fight with Hayaki. Kouji and his wound, Junpei, Kouichi, and Takuya.'

i thought kouichi wasn't at their school? 0.0

anyway, cute fic, update soon!

izumi minamoto
bluemoonlightgirl 6/1/06 . chapter 5
Great chapter, please update soon!
xx.faith 4/12/06 . chapter 4
update!
naomi Dominguez 4/9/06 . chapter 4
good fic . me like... continue please
Izumi Rules 3/25/06 . chapter 4
Nice fic! really good plot by the way... and it seems real! great! can't wait for the next chapter! keep it up! oh and by the way when you wrote: “Izumi, you are so pathetic, I don’t want to be your girlfriend anymore!” Hayaki yelled. I suppose you ment boyfriend keep that in mind ok?
kiyoiyuki 3/20/06 . chapter 4
ooh nice fic. I'm liking your plot here. I'm glad you got rid of the "signing into my mind" or whatever stuff, it was really... wierd... and bravo on separating the paragraphs into different littler blurbs, it's sometimes hard to read if it's all clumped together.

keep going informal, because too formal writing makes ya feel like you're in school again... keep it loose, like this last chapter. good job on it, keep writing )
Chibisuke 2/14/06 . chapter 3
kute story plz update soon!
till the end of time 2/13/06 . chapter 3
Lolz great stori so far! update soon s2
wolfcrossbreed 2/12/06 . chapter 3
LOVE TRIANGLE!sorry...i just had to say that...really great story...update soon
Riyukku Sayuri 2/12/06 . chapter 3
x3 I like the story! :]
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