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Me 1/30/12 . chapter 1
So cute! :D
KaguraTheWindGypsy 1/22/10 . chapter 1
lol i thought that since he was upset about something i thought he was gonna be on stage or something. & if i was there i'd be like "Take it off! take ALL off!" just to mess with his head xDD but he went to a kids house. can't say it there. the pomato thing was hilarious to.
Anne Packrat 4/9/06 . chapter 1
Hm, nicely done. A good holiday fic.
rizahawkeye21 3/10/06 . chapter 1
i really liked this story. it was so sweet. the little girl Delia reminds me of someone i know... kinda creepy but- anyway keep writing uve done well.
Frozen-Passion 2/12/06 . chapter 1
This was mucho cute! Roy as santa would be hilarious. I giggled over the whole orangple and pomato. That was maga-cuteness. Ah I love Roy/Riza.

*Am all giggly now* I must read more!

-Frozen-Passion-
momiji-k 1/25/06 . chapter 1
Cute little fic! :)
SparrowWriter64 1/6/06 . chapter 1
Ok, you have successfully entered the FMA fanfic world...i haven't done that yet, haha. But someday soon, I might enter it. But yeah, this was really cute. You need to write more, because I seriously loved this chapter. I love Roy/Riza...I have fanart, started fics that never made it past a couple paragraphs because I have a short attention-span...

I look forward to when you update!
MoonStarDutchess 1/6/06 . chapter 1
This is very cute. I enjoyed it.
rainismysunshine 1/4/06 . chapter 1
yes! pomato! lo...man this story was totally awesome!lol...

Rayne
Insanatrix 1/3/06 . chapter 1
Not too weird in my opinion and I don't mind not having the Elrics. Really great, BTW :)
Flye 1/2/06 . chapter 1
AWW-WHEE! That was beautiful. And his mission was hilarious!

Very good idea! The fic was really good. I enjoyed reading it and it made me smile. tee hee.

Great job!

:]
Mairanu 1/2/06 . chapter 1
Oh That was so cool I really liked it you should write more FMA fics :D (I’ll make you write it) *smirks evilly then laughs* I love it keep up the good work !

(And hurry up and finish your other stories I need to know what happens next!)

OPA Risako!

Your sis
Hashkorns 1/2/06 . chapter 1
Lovely. *clap clap*
Anbu Shinigami Alchemist 1/2/06 . chapter 1
That was totally... WICKED! That was so awesome! Wow I just wrote this whole review in like 10 seconds or something like that! _
time can take its toll 1/2/06 . chapter 1
*freaks out, spazzes, dies*

Sako-Sako .. phwee! *bursts into spontaneous hyper giggles* That was so .. sweet / funny / crazy / adorable / pomato-nessh / PERFECT. Honestly. You know how much I adore your writing, and I'm all giddy & shiyat now. Roy as a Santa .. ohmygosh. That was just choice xDD .. and the fluff. That subtle, stubborn fluff. Quaaaaaaaah! n_n

AND IT'S EVEN GOT THE POMATO x 9834793874

I love how you can make such a serious opening turn humourous with your random little quirks! And even then it turned all R-squared which is awesome love . You make me want to try writing RoyxRiza. Roy is ON FIRE y0!

*huggles* merry belated christmas & new years & shiyat. Thank you SO, SO much .. that was uber awesome badass pomato kickassh amazing [ rambles on and on ] puh to the ownage. ;-; z0mgIj00! n_n

zanisha.
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