|Reviews for Betrayal|
| TheGirlOfMyHeart 5/4/13 . chapter 4
Oh. That was unexpected. One hell of a dark fic, I'd say. XD It was well-written nonetheless, even if there were a few grammatical errors. Love the psycho-ness! (oops, that made me sound a bit insane)
| Emikadon 4/16/13 . chapter 4
I absolutely loved this! There were a few grammar/spelling errors that irritated me a bit, but other than that, I enjoyed reading about psycho Sakura and Syaoran _
| aurora0914 3/20/13 . chapter 4
so... did eriol cheat with tomoyo? Or was it the other way around? Great job!
| orenjichan92 2/6/13 . chapter 4
well, how to say this... I won't say that I didn't expect it, in fact, I have guess it... (being a psycho myself, LOL)
I was surprised, however, to see this coming from you...
I mean, I read Through A Looking Glass, and it is really different from... this...
This, this... This is so much darker and sick, yet beautiful nonetheless...
LOVE IT! v
| Erylle 4/8/12 . chapter 3
What I love the most about your story is your sophiticated prose. I mean, that's pretty hard to find with all the Fanfictions these days.
I'm not too familiar with Card Captor Sakura but your writing makes it so easy for me to follow.
Too bad you haven't posted any new stories lately because you have such a talent.
| Dandy352 11/27/11 . chapter 4
That is one heck of a dark fic. Gosh...first time I've read an SxS like this. Got to admit, you wrote it well :)
| chuxox 11/2/11 . chapter 4
i was reading some of the reviews and i think some people might have a misunderstanding...its sakura and syaoran that betrayed their loves and thats why they kept saying at the end that they were in love with each other since young and basically the whole thing was all a ploy...though it was too damn obvious cus their dead bodies are right under the bed
| XsaeX 10/7/11 . chapter 4
I finally got the whole freezing house thingi. lol that thing was annoying me since chapter 1. loved the story! dark yet so well written.
| ReploidCat 7/22/11 . chapter 1
Whoa... after checking the dates Eriol was dead a week by the start of Chapter 1. Sakura was too insane to notice it and tells Tomoyo and Syaoran a week after that. Syaoran then kills Tomoyo 2 days after both went talking with Sakura. A week after that Syaoran talks to Sakura alone and they hit it up as the insane duo.
| ReploidCat 7/22/11 . chapter 2
Oh my... I'm rereading this as I read the other reviews and Syaoran has lost it. So... the day before anniversary Eriol is killed by Sakura. and 8 days later, Syaoran kills Tomoyo because of the plane tickets he found proving the affiar.. A week after that he talks to Sakura and she knew it too and they've both lost it where it's just casual talk to them. Freaky.
| ReploidCat 7/22/11 . chapter 4
Oh my. Sakura and Syaoran killed Eriol and Tomoyo respectively, and then went to the islands, seems like Sakura lost it from the previous chapter it seems.
| fay208 5/5/11 . chapter 4
both sakura and syaoran are psychos! XP
i'm quite dense in this type of story. but the last sentence just creeps me out, plus i'm reading this at midnight.
anyway, great story! *winks*
| Hellmaster Fibby 4/12/11 . chapter 4
I have to be honest, I kind of expected that ending. :) But wow, the way you wrote it was wicked. And I agree with you, four chapters was enough for this story. It would not have the same effect if you kept it going for too long. :) Excellent work!
| kara'mel'-chan 1/18/11 . chapter 4
Oh my gosh. That was... Awwweeesome! Tbh I only read chapter four cause... I'm a lazy person okayyy? Actually, it's that reason and cause I didn't want to knw the drama. Just how they died/murdered/etc. (Ooooo yes. I'm aware of my sadistic-ness. XD it's very interesting... I feel so morbid. Lol!) Awesome way of portraying someone who's not sane. Insane as we normally say it. I was just exanding the word. Hahaha xDD I can't comment on the other chapters but I can surely say chapter four was a good ending(not the common one... Just for these type of stories.) I'll read the other chapters when I got nothin fun to do ;D
| LadyMidnightGuardian 12/23/10 . chapter 4
omg... like a rose for emily... COOL XD awesome story :D I can't wait for more XD