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| sesshysgirl1213 2008-01-04 ch 22,  | abuseThis is a really good story and you should keep it up. You really shouldn't care what peoplr think about your OC, write with an OC, too and yours is just fine. Please keep up the good work and keep updating! =) |
| Dragon of Twilight 2007-12-17 ch 22, | abuseare you giving up on this story? aww, i wanna know what happens to Shina! and how did Shino get away from the pirates? will he find her? update when you can! :) |
| creepyfreak395 2007-12-09 ch 22, | abuseI know there's probably no chance of you updating again... but PLEASE! |
| reader ninja 2007-06-14 ch 22, | abuseWhen are you going to make a new one? This is a great story and I wish to find out more. |
| Evil and Jazzymint 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseEvil: D: Ignore the ''it tends to make the story very, very boring' part! Thanks!! *runs away* Jazzymint: I'm terrified of Shina! |
| contour 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseYAY! A fun girl! I'm excited! |
| Evil :3 2007-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusex.x I-I-I'm sorry, but I can't go on reading this... It's horrible... Well, not that your writing isn't good, it truely is, but the character, 'Shina' is, to put it plainly, is a mary-sue. Heres some random facts 'n tips for stuff 'n stuff... -There is ONLY 3 students in a TEAM -Please think of more original character names...Please D: -If your going to make an OC character, please do NOT make him/her; Perfect in every way, so beautifull that no guy/girl can't resist her/him, the characters instantly fall in love with her/him, very powerfull jutsus that hasn't even been heard of..ect (So mainly, just make your character have some faults, some restrictions, and is not perfect, it tends to make the story very, very boring) Sorry for wasting your time on making you read this! XD ~Evil ~.^ |
| darkheart1992 2007-03-14 ch 22, anon. | abuseupdate when u can |
| Searching for Blood 2007-01-27 ch 22, | abuseOMG!OMG INDEED! I bet...it's..an...elephant! Update soon. Best story evah... |
| Max 2007-01-18 ch 22, anon. | abuseThis one of the best Shino stories I've ever read. Please update soon. |
| sethsmababy 2007-01-09 ch 22, anon. | abuse...short...illiterate...but over all a good cliffy |
| D. Blade 2007-01-09 ch 22, | abuseLoved the chapter, make the next one soon! -D. Blade |
| Shy-Princess 2007-01-09 ch 22, | abuseNO!! Stupid cliff-hangers!! *Cries* T_T |
| IEatChicken 2007-01-09 ch 22, | abuseWo!! ::cheers:: Awsome! YAYA! |
| Anime-Kunoichi 2007-01-08 ch 22, | abuseupdate soon! Luv your story!! |