Wow...Harry Potter and RENT meshed into one. Never thought I would see the day. Overall, it wasn't too bad. I felt like you rushed the whole thing. I know the point of a one shot, but I didn't see the point in moving so quickly. You had some potential here, but it wasn't fleshed out. You mentioned so many characters that we never met; and if I hadn't seen RENT I would have been totally lost. I also think that the last quarter of your story was just a little to word for word from the movie. But overall you have a good writing style, and I did enjoy several of your other works, especially Next! :) What a fun idea!:)

Keep writing! :)
~G

great story!

OMG
A RENT based Harry Potter fic

fucking amazing...like my two obsseions combined lol

good job

WOW!! i am getting to like more and more hary/severus fics lately! great job!

good chapter

I liked it...now I have the sudden urge to go listen to my Rent soundtrack! I hope you don't mind though if I point out a mistake. When you wrote "that Ron Weasley, who had been Ron’s boyfriend", didn't you mean Seamus's boyfriend? Besides that, very good!

Awesome job! Very well-done! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future...

It would be better if you put the lyrics in.

well that was interesting. Snape really should have listened to Harry. At least it's ok now

as a renthead I say that was...interesting
as a harry/severus fan I say good job!

hey dude totally awsome,hope this isn't a oneshot.:D
anyways seya later.
Vicky.