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| DK1979 2007-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a pretty nice start. It's a little wordy in some places; you could cut extra words out here and there to make it flow better, because there were some places I was jerked out of the poem because of the choppiness. But otherwise, there's some nice images here that I like. This was such a good book, I did research on the feud and am planning myself to write fanfiction based off of it. :) Good job. |
| savannahbabe101 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abusethis was really good! i loved the coffin quilt, i always felt so bad for ro... i really liked your descriptions of ro towards the end. and your ending altogether was great! |